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Dark Dissolving In Dew-Drops

The quiet the calm the hush
Morning melting the night
Dark dissolving in dew-drops
The light the sheen the lush



The lips the smile the dimple
On streets the childhood spree
Movies of unfolding pink life
Hibiscus rustic and simple



The fury  the flash and fire
Do not desire to dominate
Their eyes fixed at Krishna
With Radha playing the lyre

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29 May, 2019

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Date: 5/31/2019 6:26:00 AM
Imaginative and creative. You really own these rare qualities, Gupta.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/31/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation ... I don't think I have any rare quality ... I like metaphoric expression and practice it as and when I feel bore ... Thank you once again for reading the poem ...
Date: 5/30/2019 10:44:00 AM
The styling is impressive, the content delightful - you created an original gem with your unique pen. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/31/2019 12:04:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay ... Glad to have comments from you ... Autumn dew ...

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