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Dark Dissolving In Dew-Drops

The quiet the calm the hush Morning melting the night Dark dissolving in dew-drops The light the sheen the lush The lips the smile the dimple On streets the childhood spree Movies of unfolding pink life Hibiscus rustic and simple The fury the flash and fire Do not desire to dominate Their eyes fixed at Krishna With Radha playing the lyre --------------------------------- 29 May, 2019 AN UPLIFTING FEELING Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/31/2019 6:26:00 AM
Imaginative and creative. You really own these rare qualities, Gupta.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/31/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation ... I don't think I have any rare quality ... I like metaphoric expression and practice it as and when I feel bore ... Thank you once again for reading the poem ...
Date: 5/30/2019 10:44:00 AM
The styling is impressive, the content delightful - you created an original gem with your unique pen. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/31/2019 12:04:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay ... Glad to have comments from you ... Autumn dew ...

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