Dark Debonair Cheers

Despite your proclivity for the dramatic,
your latest love saga limps barren of marrow.
Perhaps your heart’s unfruitful seeds need a harrow,
lest your spent nuance-fields shrivel up traumatic.

You brag and attest that cupid well tends your quest,
leaving raw, arrow-clad women piled as discards.
You secretly fear lust might pulse your heart to shards,
yet with temerity, you divest, then detest.

Wimpy-lame best names your decrepit armature.
You feel sure you have sent many down pain’s vortex.
You think yourself debonair and worldly complex,
but such false cheers just you hear in dark’s aperture.










CayCay Jennings 
November 1, 2018 
written for contest that required the italicized words be used

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/2/2018 9:23:00 AM
CayCay, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:42:00 PM
Very powerful, CayCay, and well-written using the required eight words! Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/28/2018 2:26:00 PM
Smoldering put-down, with the words interweaved so well. Wonderful winner CayCay! Kudos! Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:52:00 AM
Kick ass poem CayCay! Love it! Congratulations on your win! xomo :)
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:10:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, CayCay - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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Date: 11/27/2018 7:17:00 PM
Congrats!!! on your awesome win Cay Cay...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/27/2018 4:40:00 PM
Arrow-clad women as discards...wow...special writing skills on display, congrats Cay Cay on a fine win!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/28/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for sponsoring so many great contests. Your efforts are appreciated - it can't be easy! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 11/6/2018 10:32:00 AM
A very powerful statement; there are so many like that. Best of luck with the contest and well done.
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Date: 11/3/2018 9:34:00 PM
Oooh. Such well-aimed, stinging barbs. This really puts us males in our place! Well-done. ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:12:00 AM
This has a classic feel. Well done, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/2/2018 1:19:00 AM
A most impressive write! I'm sure this will fair well in the contest. Good luck to you
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