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Depression sinking Questioning life what's it worth Is there forgiveness Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 05/18/2009 *Not to worry about me. I'm just trying to understand a friend that suffers from depression.

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Date: 5/27/2009 8:55:00 AM
Your heart is in the right place ... empathy opens doors.
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:25:00 PM
LOL ... well, we'll worry anyway ... smile ... depression is part of the journey ... how can you recognize JOY if you never know sorrow? This too shall pass ... it always does ....
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:49:00 AM
Depression, the symptom that can grow and fester, until it bursts, not nice, James
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:34:00 AM
God says we must forgive im just learning that but i needed forgiveness many of times and so i believe we must its harder to forgive than to be mad be strong brother and trust in Him
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:18:00 PM
Dear Nathan, This is a continuation of my previous Comment If I get Tagged Again Before YOU "Tag YOUR IT" ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:15:00 PM
Dear Nathan, Excellent Senryu These would be my answers to the end of each line : "Titantic" "Priceless" " Y E S " Tell YOUR Friend To take a walk through in the Mountains, not on a path, not on a road but through the beauty of nature walk with YOUR eyes and ears The aromas of Earth SUPERB WRITE, I read YOUR Comment on Barbara Gorelick's POEM " OK Abe, your up next " This is a POETRY SOUP Game If YOU get tagged YOU have TO pass it on with a Dedication to another Souper ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:05:00 PM
Yes, there is always forgiveness. I think most go through times like this and will relate to you words. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:04:00 PM
Very nicely done, and I just learned something new thanks to you. I just learned the difference between Haiku and Senryu. Only a devoted friend would take the time to learn more about what a friend is suffering in order to help. Great writing. Best wishes to you and your friend. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:57:00 AM
most likely the 2nd. hardest puzzle in life...nice! Jim
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