Dark Coat-Tails

Naked as the day of my birth, I lay upon the floor
coverless and chill, eyes fluttering, closed, yet aware... 
inwardly I stare, counting chest rises, in despair.
My fear of onward life is more than I can ignore.
Outside, a fluttering of wings seeking to explore,
the haunting howl of wolf, whose mating call taunts, beware,
both harbingers of death; I grasp with each breath of air,
sending scorching ripples through a shaking fearful core.

Moonlight cloaks my sentient form, and heaven guards my plight.
Covers tossed, comfort shorn, I search for ribald tales
to return to me a bit of warmth and playful light.
A hoot, a yip, a chirping melody, which prevails
reminding me of the paths beyond the pale that invite,
for I am just a dreamer tossed, on night's dark coat-tails.


Date: 9/26/12
Contest: Dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gildersleeve Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Debbie I enjoyed reading your winning poem this evening. Congratulation! Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
Bacha Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations Debbie, enjoyed reading your poem. As usual your poems have deep beautiful sentences. Love Terry xoxo
Merryman Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 1:33 PM
There's so much dramatic imagery in this write. Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your well deserved win. Connie
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February 25, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Debbie ' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
Hunter Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Great lines here, Debbie....masterful...congrats!
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February 24, 2013 at 9:05 PM
Hola Debbie, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA
Collins Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 7:24 AM
I love it.
Mannan Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 11:24 PM
This is really wonderful Debbie. Love the last line.
Wellington Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 10:08 PM
"Moonlight cloaks my sentiment form and heaven guards my plight." Like, who writes like this...only a great poetic mind. Did you lay on the floor as the day of your birth? just askin!! One love. Joy Wells
Guzzi Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 5:53 AM
hmm I meant the naked part was there NOW and at birth..good point Joy!
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