Dark Beneath Light

Edged beauty carved precisely
                                                               The heaven pours its soul out
Contrasting with the evil, 


                                         beauty hides the shame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations on you fine Ist Place Win in John's Contest, Sarah. Always, Annalise
Casey Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Thank you Sara, I'm so happy you like my work. Carol- thank you, it's an honor!
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on this outstanding poem placing 1st in John's contest Sarah. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 3:15 AM
Congratulatins on your win.
Casey Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 1:35 AM
Thank you all, it is an honor hearing comments from great poets!
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:53 PM
wow, what a great interesting last line. A big congrats to you.
Freeman Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 6:29 PM
Extremely happy to see you at the top Sara. Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor, Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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