Dark and the Light-Or-The Goose and the Bride

Dark and the Light- or- The Goose and the Bride


Act  1
Sunlit promenade juts majestically into the musical pond, spying a Hen Goose appearing to 
be sitting on her nest at the end of the popular walkway. I imagined the poor girl had no idea 
the odds were stacked against her hatchlings ever glimpsing sunlight.

Act  2
 Each day I walked in the park, she was still there, her mate just off-shore, only leaping up 
to the promenade to help repel anyone daring to venture down the narrow walkway. In a 
flash, she would leap off her nest honking, hissing and snapping at intruders. I watched this 
scene unfold with disbelief for three and a half weeks….still she was on her 
nest…..sometimes I would come across unsuspecting victims of her assault, muttering 
epitaphs of a goosely nature.

Act  3
Halfway through the fourth week, I looked and she was gone, maybe, I thought, she was 
successful and had moved with her goslings to the more rugged north-park area of the 
winding pond. Not seeing her there, I asked my friend, the park manager, if he knew of her 
conclusion. He told me he found her eggs smashed, and one time, came upon adults kicking 
the Mother Goose… I borrowed a line from the Black Sox Scandal “say it ain’t so, Joe!”

Act  4
Shaking my head, I proceeded on the path towards the promenade up ahead…. there, on the 
very spot where she defended her brood ‘till death, posed a wedding couple, bathed in 
afternoon sunlight, he in crisp black, she in billowing white, bringing light to darkness…..

                                                                                      Bringing light
                                                                                                 
                                                                                                   to
                                                                                                                                      
                                                                                                      darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/22/2010 2:47:00 PM
I am not sure what way to go with this one...I could interpertate it several ways..Like someone killed the goose and smashed her eggs .....Or someone from the wedding party checked out the site and killed the goose and smashed her eggs...Great write that instilled thinking..I read one of yours and wrote one in response to your work.."Wild Iris Grows Old"..Hope that you don't mind..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2010 7:22:00 AM
great thoughts--enjoyed
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:43:00 AM
Ah, James....this would have been such a terrific entry to the Guardian Animal Spirit contest.......would have been a winner!! Keep this one in mind, if another such contest appears...I love this narration....what a tender, sad, yet also inspiring story of love, cruelty, nature, and hope...all wrapped into one. this is wonderful !!!!! Bitter sweet...if ever a story was! Carrie
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:31:00 PM
Oops - I hate my own typos and the misuse of certain words is a pet peeve of mine. Since we cannot edit our comments, please read it as "their guarded nature". Sometimes my fingers get in the way of my typing.
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:29:00 PM
Wow. Terrific tale. I walked in a park every morning for almost ten years and watched the circle of life with geese, their nests and their goslings - and, there guarded nature if humans got too close. I sinced move to another area - actually with more nature nearby, but not my geese in the park. Loved your tale.
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