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Dark and Mystical

Driving through darkness Of murky streets , Yesterday's inconstant moon Too had vanished , No shadow, No life visible, Just before the dawn The darkest hour, By reason of heart I desired to meet, Reached out In wink of stars, A sinister laugh Still in the dark, Cerebrate within reason And my world crashed, Epinephrine gush I rushed back, Intuitive I was Of inquitous plot Keep it dark, An absolutely Dark and mystical Gloaming nightfall !! Written on 6/4/14 Now entered for Kelly's contest" Happy halloween " Awarded 4th place win

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/1/2015 11:03:00 PM

Upma, your winning poem lives up to its title! Congratulations. Janice

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/1/2015 5:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your nice win, Dr. Upma. I enjoyed your take on the theme. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 11/1/2015 10:59:00 AM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Halloween win in Kelly's contest. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/31/2015 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations to you, Dr. Sharma, on your great win! Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 10/31/2015 12:05:00 AM

Congrats on your poem!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/30/2015 4:50:00 PM

Well written in a different vein than most of the others. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2015 3:38:00 PM

Hi Upma, I remember reading this poem quite a while back, and it's lovely to be able to return for a second read, thanks to your deserved win! Congratulations!! // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/30/2015 2:03:00 PM

A great poem that sets just the right mood for Halloween night... I enjoyed your poem very much, Dr. Upma! Congrats on a win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/22/2015 8:10:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Skat A

Date: 2/22/2015 5:47:00 PM

Dr Upma, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~

Nathan D.

Date: 2/22/2015 5:27:00 PM

Thank you. Nate

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/13/2014 8:21:00 AM

Were you having a allergic reaction? I am wondering why you added epinephrine to the third stanza. You have peaked my curiosity. Congratulations I enjoyed your winning poem.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/13/2014 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for liking my poem n the wishes , Glad to know abt the curiosity factor,,,,,, Shows how thoroughly u read ,,,,, Thank u so much,,,, feeling honoured !!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/13/2014 8:35:00 AM

No Richard , it's a hormone also known as adrenaline which gets automatically released in all alarming situations like fear n anxiety n causes palpitation ,,, I was just adding onto fear factor of dark n mystical,,,,

Skat A

Date: 4/12/2014 11:04:00 PM

Dr Upma, nice win, love ~SKAT~