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Dark and Light

Dark,
ravenously ruled the rocky cave for many hundred years
fearfully fled to the firmament when a little lamp brought
Light



Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE Z,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/28/2020 8:17:00 PM

Jenish, your poem is so striking in its imagery as Light banishes the Dark. Beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/28/2020 11:30:00 PM

Thank you Susan for your delightful comment and support..Takecare always..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/11/2020 11:44:00 PM

WONDERFUL Composition. Congrats. Love.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/12/2020 8:17:00 AM

Thank you..Takecare..

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/8/2020 10:06:00 PM

Beautiful alliteration, well penned piece.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/8/2020 11:44:00 PM

Thank you Kiser..

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2020 10:43:00 AM

a wonderful example for the contest and I love the description and use of alliteration, belated congrats on potd:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/8/2020 11:43:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan for your support and kind words..

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/7/2020 12:32:00 PM

Magical alliteration hidden within the caverns of your piece. Lovely, Jenish. I enjoyed the thought. Let your light shine in these crisis days. Be safe, Believe.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/8/2020 12:33:00 AM

Thank you Reason for that delightful comment.. Takecare always..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2020 1:39:00 PM

- Let the light always shine, Jenish :) - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:48:00 PM

Thank you Anne.. Let the light shine the world..Stay safe..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/5/2020 9:52:00 PM

Back to say congratulations again! Darkness cannot survive exposure turning the tables on darkness!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 11:10:00 PM

Thank you for your continuing support Sam..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/5/2020 8:58:00 PM

Great poem--deserving of title POTD. Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 11:08:00 PM

Thank you Janice..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/5/2020 2:00:00 PM

Hi Jenish, congratulations my friend on you being honored with POTD. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 11:08:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/4/2020 9:18:00 PM

It is amazing. As soon as light touches the darkness, it vanishes. That truly states the obvious, about good and evil. This is beautiful my dear friend. :) Keep shining your light. Congratulations Jenish, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 12:03:00 AM

Thank you Brandy for that profound comment..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/4/2020 8:56:00 PM

Back to congratulate you dearest Jenish on your POTD honor!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 12:02:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.. Your continuous support is immeasurable for me..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2020 8:22:00 PM

another good one, and I see a POTD Congrats to you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 12:01:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for your continuous support..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2020 4:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. I am thinking about looking for a cave. Sounds nice right about now. Have a wonderful weekend.............

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/5/2020 12:00:00 AM

Thank you Paula for that wonderful comment.. Keep Safe..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/4/2020 2:10:00 PM

Jenish, beautiful images - wonderful alliteration. Congratulations on shedding light for all of us with your POTD!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 11:58:00 PM

Thank you Sam for that delightful words..

Constance La France

Date: 4/4/2020 10:49:00 AM

Jenish, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 11:57:00 PM

Thank you Constance..

Mark Koplin

Date: 4/4/2020 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD! Great poem

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Mark..

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/4/2020 7:20:00 AM

There is always light at the end of the tunnel...excellent example Jenish...and Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...stay safe & hibernate...The Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Wingster for that delightful comment.. Takecare..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/4/2020 7:15:00 AM

Glad to see you in this space, Jenish--congrats on poem of the day.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 9:10:00 AM

First time in POTD.. Surprise for this small poem..

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/4/2020 7:12:00 AM

We can do with more light...WELL DONE...Congratulations Jenish on POTD

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 9:08:00 AM

Someone needs to lit a light in this dark hours..Thank you Arturo..

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2020 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD! Enjoyed

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 9:07:00 AM

Thank you Tania..

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/4/2020 5:23:00 AM

Hope into your poetic words that bring Light into the soul.. Congratulations, Jenish, on your POTD honour! A wonderful work of Art worthy of recognition.. Best regards and blessings.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 5:48:00 AM

Your comment is more poetic than my poem.. Thank you Besma..

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/4/2020 3:52:00 AM

Even the smallest of things can shine a light, and bring hope, my friend. Congratulations, Jenish, on your well deserved POTD. And this beautiful example poem for your contest.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/4/2020 4:22:00 AM

True.. Thank you for your delightful comment.. Stay safe..