Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Dark and Light

Dark,
ravenously ruled the rocky cave for many hundred years
fearfully fled to the firmament when a little lamp brought
Light



Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE Z,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley April 28, 2020 at 8:17 PM Jenish, your poem is so striking in its imagery as Light banishes the Dark. Beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Jenish Somadas April 28, 2020 at 11:30 PM Thank you Susan for your delightful comment and support..Takecare always..

Anisha Dutta April 11, 2020 at 11:44 PM WONDERFUL Composition. Congrats. Love. Jenish Somadas April 12, 2020 at 8:17 AM Thank you..Takecare..

M. L. Kiser April 8, 2020 at 10:06 PM Beautiful alliteration, well penned piece. Jenish Somadas April 8, 2020 at 11:44 PM Thank you Kiser..

Jan Allison April 8, 2020 at 10:43 AM a wonderful example for the contest and I love the description and use of alliteration, belated congrats on potd:-) hugs Jan xx Jenish Somadas April 8, 2020 at 11:43 PM Thank you so much Jan for your support and kind words..

Reason A. Poteet April 7, 2020 at 12:32 PM Magical alliteration hidden within the caverns of your piece. Lovely, Jenish. I enjoyed the thought. Let your light shine in these crisis days. Be safe, Believe. Jenish Somadas April 8, 2020 at 12:33 AM Thank you Reason for that delightful comment.. Takecare always..

Anne-Lise Andresen April 6, 2020 at 1:39 PM - Let the light always shine, Jenish :) - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:48 PM Thank you Anne.. Let the light shine the world..Stay safe..

Sam Kauffman April 5, 2020 at 9:52 PM Back to say congratulations again! Darkness cannot survive exposure turning the tables on darkness! Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 11:10 PM Thank you for your continuing support Sam..

Janice Canerdy April 5, 2020 at 8:58 PM Great poem--deserving of title POTD. Janice Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 11:08 PM Thank you Janice..

Jennifer Proxenos April 5, 2020 at 2:00 PM Hi Jenish, congratulations my friend on you being honored with POTD. Blessings, Jennifer. Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 11:08 PM Thank you Jennifer..

Brandy Nicole April 4, 2020 at 9:18 PM It is amazing. As soon as light touches the darkness, it vanishes. That truly states the obvious, about good and evil. This is beautiful my dear friend. :) Keep shining your light. Congratulations Jenish, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 12:03 AM Thank you Brandy for that profound comment..

Demetrios Trifiatis April 4, 2020 at 8:56 PM Back to congratulate you dearest Jenish on your POTD honor! Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 12:02 AM Thank you Demetrios.. Your continuous support is immeasurable for me..

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2020 at 8:22 PM another good one, and I see a POTD Congrats to you. Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 12:01 AM Thank you Andrea for your continuous support..

Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2020 at 4:02 PM Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. I am thinking about looking for a cave. Sounds nice right about now. Have a wonderful weekend............. Jenish Somadas April 5, 2020 at 12:00 AM Thank you Paula for that wonderful comment.. Keep Safe..

Sam Kauffman April 4, 2020 at 2:10 PM Jenish, beautiful images - wonderful alliteration. Congratulations on shedding light for all of us with your POTD! Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 11:58 PM Thank you Sam for that delightful words..

Constance La France April 4, 2020 at 10:49 AM Jenish, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 11:57 PM Thank you Constance..

Mark Koplin April 4, 2020 at 7:52 AM Congratulations on POTD! Great poem Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 9:11 AM Thank you Mark..

Winged Warrior April 4, 2020 at 7:20 AM There is always light at the end of the tunnel...excellent example Jenish...and Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...stay safe & hibernate...The Wingster...^WW^ :o) Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thank you Wingster for that delightful comment.. Takecare..

Vijay Pandit April 4, 2020 at 7:15 AM Glad to see you in this space, Jenish--congrats on poem of the day. Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 9:10 AM First time in POTD.. Surprise for this small poem..

Arturo Michael April 4, 2020 at 7:12 AM We can do with more light...WELL DONE...Congratulations Jenish on POTD Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 9:08 AM Someone needs to lit a light in this dark hours..Thank you Arturo..

Tania Kitchin April 4, 2020 at 7:09 AM Congratulations on POTD! Enjoyed Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 9:07 AM Thank you Tania..

Besma Riabi Dziri April 4, 2020 at 5:23 AM Hope into your poetic words that bring Light into the soul.. Congratulations, Jenish, on your POTD honour! A wonderful work of Art worthy of recognition.. Best regards and blessings. Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 5:48 AM Your comment is more poetic than my poem.. Thank you Besma..

Jc Hawkens April 4, 2020 at 3:52 AM Even the smallest of things can shine a light, and bring hope, my friend. Congratulations, Jenish, on your well deserved POTD. And this beautiful example poem for your contest. Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 4:22 AM True.. Thank you for your delightful comment.. Stay safe..

Tom Cunningham April 4, 2020 at 2:55 AM Back with congrats Jenish on P. O. T. D. Honours. Well deserved. Stay safe. Tom Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 3:10 AM Thank you Tom for your continuing support.. Takecare..

Eve Roper April 4, 2020 at 2:09 AM Congratulations on POTD with this example for the contest. Jenish Somadas April 4, 2020 at 2:46 AM Wow.. That is a surprise.. For the first time in POTD.. Thank you Eve..

Constance La France April 3, 2020 at 4:52 PM Jenish, very nice and great example for your contest, you should get some really wonderful poems _Constance Jenish Somadas April 3, 2020 at 11:27 PM Thank you Constance.. Takecare..

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