Meenakshi Raina Poet Alliteration

Dark and Grey Night

When wise winds whispered
touched the tall tree tops,
branches opened like arms
to welcome the silent snow.
	Night was all dark and grey,
	moon buried in loneliness,  
	rugged roads remained restless, 
	while wild winds whipped.
In the night's silence I slipped
into a dream where you amazed
me with a sensuous sweet song
and secretly soothed my soul.


March 2, 2016
Night Silence - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Sunita U.D Palawon June 14, 2016 at 10:58 AM Congrats. I like your write. I'm impressed by the use of personification.

Teddy Kimathi June 14, 2016 at 4:16 AM Congrats Meenakshi, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Karam Misra June 14, 2016 at 1:04 AM Congratulations on your win, Meenakshi. ~karam~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores June 13, 2016 at 8:10 PM Congratulations Meenakshi on the placement of the contest

Walter Alter March 2, 2016 at 5:11 PM Nice alliteration. Loved "moon buried in lonliness". Echoed the snow fall burying everything as well as the reflection of the moon off the snow and lighting the surroundings. In short, you have a lot of imagic density which is what poetry is supposed to be. Meenakshi Raina March 2, 2016 at 8:12 PM Thank you.....you added a new dimension of snowfall burying everything...I liked that.