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Dark-Edged Forest

Tall,shady,green trees, Sweet,fresh cold breeze, Here I am,standing in the middle of the forest, Feeling alone and abandoned by the rest. I walk,walk and walk,until I feel tired, I seek,seek and seek but seems I'm a blind, Nothing,nothing is all I can see, Except that tall,tall tree. So I sit under its shady leaves, There,I opened up my grieves Maybe,a single tree could understand, Why I am pouring my tears on land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/31/2016 7:08:00 PM
very sad write Welvin:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Welvin Templo
Date: 9/4/2016 10:10:00 PM
hehe....thats the reality of life :) we need accept everything :)
Date: 8/31/2016 12:54:00 AM
So, so good, Welvin Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Welvin Templo
Date: 9/4/2016 10:42:00 PM
hello :)

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