Daring

Daring

Each of us creates
that which appears..
This truth startles 
yet attracts our daring..
Each longs to be free
of Newton's hold
but such freedom is
named as folly..
So we remain
waiting for grace
to bless our daring...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Densham Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Quick, sharp and incisive. Enjoyed the construction and the message. Thanks.
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Terrific last three lines. Well done Charles...
Coon Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Thank you much, Charlie (another Charlie!)...
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