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Dare Ye Dare Ye

Dare ye! Dare ye! Dare ye unlock the tomb release the musty words of fear unleash the vitriol of anger upon the rusted lockset Freedom does not free one from the mind’s dungeon nor sweeten the stench of clutched bitterness Dare ye step away deny the bindings power to entrap us as we flee the burden of being free Scars are not the price we pay only reminders of its sting scabbed testament to a will that would not bend Dare ye breathe the breath of who we are leave behind the shadow of what we had become Shed tears that cleanse blurred opaque vision smile through the pain of joy’s remembrance? ©John G. Lawless 4/5/2017

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Date: 4/8/2017 12:02:00 AM
Dare we breathe the breath of who we are, I love that line. Many awesome lines in this call to "smile through the pain". A fave
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Date: 4/7/2017 5:15:00 AM
What a great call to transparency, John. I think I have taken the dare. My poems are born of pain and anger...vitriol is there too, as in my poem, I Hate You. I'm glad to see you encouraging us to be REAL. :)
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Date: 4/6/2017 11:10:00 AM
4th and 5th verses are great John. I really like this one...
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Date: 4/6/2017 7:25:00 AM
Really nicely done. I like how this moves along at a nice pace as I read today. You have captured a bit of darkness but also some courage in your poem. Very cool.
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