Dare to Discover

Do dead dreams turn a heart dark
What say you to ignite silver spark
What if I told you you’re not alone
Not last not first but in your place
That you are indeed someone’s dream
And for you to give up is tragedy
Not just for you but for the world 
Yes for it is a small world
Made of people who need each other 
Even when unaware of the truth 
People who have broken hearts do
Mend
So my friend pick up the pieces
Start again
For even broken crayons color
And you can discover
Dreams still live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Challender Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Powerful stuff. Great poem & love the line about broken crayons.
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Thanks for reading Martin!
Greenhough Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 10:39 AM
This is a beautiful poem of hope. Joy of life should stay in everyone's life. You are so in sync in your lovely writing.
Jones Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Aw that’s so sweet of you to say Hilda! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:11 AM
Your right. Dreams still live. Keep strong.
Jones Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Thanks Victor! Hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Hello Karen, Yes broken hearts do mend. Start again see where it goes. Leave the past behind. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 9:49 AM
Hello Karen, yes i do understand. Hugs. /Darlene/ I hbope all is well with you.
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Exactly Darlene! Glad you understand! Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Love the lines: For even broken crayons color And you can discover Dreams still live.
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 4:37 PM
Kim I’m happy you love those lines ! Hugs
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 12:14 PM
Emotional and profound self-reflection. It is possible to light a fire even when all hope seems lost.
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 4:35 PM
So true Sotto! Hugs
One Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Deep and emotive introspection, I hope you find your answers..
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 4:31 PM
Hug thanks Silent One
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 4:20 AM
Dear Karen, This is a beautiful heartfelt poem that shows that even when dreams seem lost, they can still ignite a spark. Our dreams are still live. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 5:14 AM
Thanks for the compliment Daniel! Blessings returned!
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