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Do dead dreams turn a heart dark What say you to ignite silver spark What if I told you you’re not alone Not last not first but in your place That you are indeed someone’s dream And for you to give up is tragedy Not just for you but for the world Yes for it is a small world Made of people who need each other Even when unaware of the truth People who have broken hearts do Mend So my friend pick up the pieces Start again For even broken crayons color And you can discover Dreams still live.

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Date: 6/14/2024 9:08:00 AM
Powerful stuff. Great poem & love the line about broken crayons.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2024 10:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading Martin!
Date: 6/13/2024 10:39:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem of hope. Joy of life should stay in everyone's life. You are so in sync in your lovely writing.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/13/2024 12:58:00 PM
Aw that’s so sweet of you to say Hilda! Thank you!
Date: 6/13/2024 2:11:00 AM
Your right. Dreams still live. Keep strong.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/13/2024 2:34:00 AM
Thanks Victor! Hugs
Date: 6/11/2024 3:20:00 PM
Hello Karen, Yes broken hearts do mend. Start again see where it goes. Leave the past behind. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2024 9:49:00 AM
Hello Karen, yes i do understand. Hugs. /Darlene/ I hbope all is well with you.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/11/2024 4:38:00 PM
Exactly Darlene! Glad you understand! Hugs
Date: 6/11/2024 2:44:00 PM
Love the lines: For even broken crayons color And you can discover Dreams still live.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/11/2024 4:37:00 PM
Kim I’m happy you love those lines ! Hugs
Date: 6/11/2024 12:14:00 PM
Emotional and profound self-reflection. It is possible to light a fire even when all hope seems lost.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/11/2024 4:35:00 PM
So true Sotto! Hugs
Date: 6/11/2024 12:09:00 PM
Deep and emotive introspection, I hope you find your answers..
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/11/2024 4:31:00 PM
Hug thanks Silent One
Date: 6/11/2024 4:20:00 AM
Dear Karen, This is a beautiful heartfelt poem that shows that even when dreams seem lost, they can still ignite a spark. Our dreams are still live. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/11/2024 5:14:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment Daniel! Blessings returned!

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