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Dare I say
   you awaken
      the b e a s t
         in me, and how!

Your b e g u i l i n g charm
   tempts me to
      madness!
         The warmth...

your smile
   could t h a w out
      iciest
         of hearts; it did mine!

The f i r e in your eyes does
   glow...
      brighter than the sun!

               (Yalto)


N-A re-run 8 Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Date submitted: 06/15/2020

BRIAN'S SELECT C,any form,any theme
Contest Judged:  06/11/2020 (N/A)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

Date written: 06/10/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/17/2020 9:49:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, congrats Edward on another fine win!
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Date: 6/10/2020 9:12:00 PM
She sounds awesome! Enjoyed this. xomo
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/10/2020 10:31:00 PM
Still making me giggle with that! <3
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/10/2020 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Pidge:-)
Date: 6/10/2020 7:51:00 PM
Very Nice a good one to give to someone
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/10/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you, Linda:-)

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