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Dare

She walks amid flowers where I see the blue jasmine and the white lily bowing as she goes like a colibri flipping her wings, laughing silly… The wind enters, taking the scent away, a thief we both, also invisible, holding her waist, to kiss then to sway, quoting a song found in a Bible. When spring comes, she will leave there and bloom anew, a bough in her hand on head a garland and a quietly dare: Would I obey love’s command?

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Date: 2/10/2014 2:49:00 PM
Joao, i do enjoy the new. lovely image. SKAT
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Date: 2/9/2014 10:11:00 PM
I love this Camilo! 'Love's command' - now that is one command that can prove difficult to accept but very satisfying to follow when all things fall in place. Very well written!
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