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Dapper Draper

Suspect Dapper Draper, half-scammed a bank caper. With his brother Baker, Whose a known safe breaker. They rode on fly paper. To escape down a scraper. The plans were mere vapor. They were caught in a chaser. Serving ten at hard labor. Guess it would've been plainer, If they'd read the disclaimer. Those crazy brothers Draper..

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/4/2023 10:46:00 AM

Great one….fun! And I adore your rhyme scheme! And an entire story in a poem. Fabulous job Monorhyme s are cool, Hugs, Pangie xo 4/4/2023

R J. Elless
Date: 4/4/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank You, Pangie. I will. Be reading many of Your poems. XO Have A Great Day.

Chinedum Ekwobi

Date: 9/16/2022 9:16:00 AM

That is the way is should be: Heist fails and The Subject faces The Wrath of The Law. Let us celebrate with The Persona over Subjects' malady!

R J. Elless
Date: 9/19/2022 7:48:00 AM

Chinedum, Thank You for taking the time to read it and your comment Quite fun. Keep Rolling, Howard.

Ray Zottola

Date: 6/13/2022 7:31:00 AM

So funny, so good!

R J. Elless
Date: 6/13/2022 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Ray, for taking the time to read my poem. Howard