Daphne

In quiet anticipation, Daphne carefully sewed
tiny outfits of love for her soon to be child.
With her soft braided hair and loose, faded clothes
Daphne sung lullabies, then stared off for awhile.

When her due date came, we wished Daphne well
for our small sewing circle was caring and kind
Daphne looked embarrassed, but was happy to tell
that she'd show us her baby at just the right time.

About a month later, sweet Daphne appeared
gently cradling her sleeping, angelic little girl
With a hushed adoration, we all drew near her
and beheld the most beautiful baby in the world.

When the ladies dispersed, I asked Daphne if I
could hold her new baby, I'd hold her with care
with a brief hesitation, she said, "Just a short while"
her perfect, silicone baby was lighter than air.






Written on 5/26/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/10/2017 5:58:00 AM
I do love the haunting nature of this poem :) congrats on placement in the contest Laura! Cheers dears! xomo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen. I wanted it to be a bit creepy and mysterious:)
Date: 4/9/2017 7:34:00 PM
Interesting write, Laura. For some reason, my first interpretation was that *Daphne* was actually a doll (the braided hair / faded clothes line pointed me in this direction). Then I thought it was a real baby that she'd lost... Work's on several levels. Well written! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/9/2017 6:31:00 PM
Laura, this is a little mind twister of a poem. Each time I returned to it I pondered another interpretation. Thanks for entering the contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2017 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, John, for my placement in your contest! Glad you liked this one. :)
Date: 7/14/2016 3:12:00 AM
Congrats Laura, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/15/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy :)
Date: 7/13/2016 5:46:00 PM
Sad but well done and a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/15/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce :)
Date: 7/12/2016 6:22:00 PM
I have never ever played with dolls - loved the ending of the poem but i did find it sad:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:16:00 AM
I really liked this, Laura. It makes me wonder if she was simply crazy all that time or if she sadly lost the baby!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2016 4:14:00 PM
That's "dolls"!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/29/2016 4:10:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by with your comments, Andrea. Yes, it's a little sad and creepy that people need these folds, but who am I to judge their needs.
Date: 5/26/2016 8:12:00 PM
Wow Laura! Sadly this happens. I guess people get comfort however they can, even if they have to pretend. Your entry should do really well Laura. It is very touching.#7. ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thanks for commenting, Connie. Those magazine ads to buy these realistic babies always creeped me out...so sad some really need this for comfort.
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