Daphne

In quiet anticipation, Daphne carefully sewed
tiny outfits of love for her soon to be child
with her soft braided hair and loose, faded clothes
Daphne sung lullabies, then stared off for awhile.

When her due date came, we wished Daphne well
for our small sewing circle was caring and kind
Daphne looked embarrassed, but was happy to tell
that she'd show us her baby at just the right time.

A few months later, sweet Daphne appeared
gently cradling her sleeping, angelic little girl
with a hushed adoration, we all drew near her
and beheld the most beautiful baby in the world.

When the ladies dispersed, I asked Daphne if I
could hold her new baby, I'd hold her with care
with a brief hesitation, she said, "Just a short while.”
her perfect, silicone baby was lighter than air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 5:58 AM
I do love the haunting nature of this poem :) congrats on placement in the contest Laura! Cheers dears! xomo
Leiser Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Thanks, Maureen. I wanted it to be a bit creepy and mysterious:)
Michaels Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Interesting write, Laura. For some reason, my first interpretation was that *Daphne* was actually a doll (the braided hair / faded clothes line pointed me in this direction). Then I thought it was a real baby that she'd lost... Work's on several levels. Well written! Regards, John.
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Laura, this is a little mind twister of a poem. Each time I returned to it I pondered another interpretation. Thanks for entering the contest
Leiser Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, John, for my placement in your contest! Glad you liked this one. :)
Kimathi Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 3:12 AM
Congrats Laura, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Leiser Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thank you, Teddy :)
Johnson Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Sad but well done and a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Leiser Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thank you, Joyce :)
Allison Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 6:22 PM
I have never ever played with dolls - loved the ending of the poem but i did find it sad:-( hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:16 AM
I really liked this, Laura. It makes me wonder if she was simply crazy all that time or if she sadly lost the baby!!
Leiser Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 4:14 PM
That's "dolls"!
Leiser Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Thanks for stopping by with your comments, Andrea. Yes, it's a little sad and creepy that people need these folds, but who am I to judge their needs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Wow Laura! Sadly this happens. I guess people get comfort however they can, even if they have to pretend. Your entry should do really well Laura. It is very touching.#7. ; )
Leiser Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Thanks for commenting, Connie. Those magazine ads to buy these realistic babies always creeped me out...so sad some really need this for comfort.
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