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Danny

Danny down the hall just behind the door. Thunder coming from it. Presence made galore. Cozy with a two-four. Danny home to drink. Left upon his own. A girl to make him think. T-shirt with a logo. Danny's casual dress. Smell of smoke right through it. His ball cap holding mess. Shoes left in the hallway leaning to the wall. Just aside the pathway where Danny sweeps the hall. Sunshine from the window Danny stands in view. Watching those who enter whenever one comes through. Danny down the hallway. Asking what is new. Pray it's not a foul mood or Danny's on the brew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/21/2015 8:55:00 PM
You have used this format well, and we can experience Danny as you do through your powers of observation and expression. I enjoyed your poem.
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 1/22/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment Leo. I'm flattered to know I was able to bring some life to him. Thanks so much.

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