Dangling Participles

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in the silence of the night ring loudest words unsaid the gaps the hesitations admissions left half hanging AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on July 19, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/20/2021 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations Line, nice one...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/20/2021 3:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Delice ~

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2021 10:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine placement. A clever witty poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/20/2021 3:29:00 PM

Much appreciated, Victor ~

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/19/2021 8:13:00 PM

"admissions left half hanging" so filled with truth Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/20/2021 3:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Nancy ~

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/19/2021 9:22:00 AM

Ah, so true and so succinctly expressed, Line. I liked your lines.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2021 12:32:00 PM

Thanks, Milton ~ much appreciated

Judy Ball

Date: 7/19/2021 9:14:00 AM

Sometimes silence is loud. Great job here Line, as always. God Bless, JB

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2021 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Judy ~