Notes About The Poem

Dangling Participles

in the silence
of the night

ring loudest
words unsaid

the gaps
the hesitations

admissions left
half hanging



AP: 3rd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Skelly Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations Line, nice one...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Thank you very much, Delice ~
Buhagiar Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:26 PM
Congratulations on your fine placement. A clever witty poem.
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Much appreciated, Victor ~
Kaufman Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 8:13 PM
"admissions left half hanging" so filled with truth Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Thank you very much, Nancy ~
Hankins Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Ah, so true and so succinctly expressed, Line. I liked your lines.
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Thanks, Milton ~ much appreciated
Ball Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Sometimes silence is loud. Great job here Line, as always. God Bless, JB
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Thank you so much, Judy ~
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