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Dangerous Voices

There are those deadly thoughts Trying to take you over It’s like a little voice in your head Sending you messages Telling you you’re not loved Making you feel worthless and invisible It makes you want to cry yourself to sleep Makes you feel weak Because you’ve become a slave to its feelings Unable to escape from its prison Its jail of deadly feeling and thoughts You have to try to release yourself from its grasp Try to tell yourself that you’re alive for a reason That your life has meaning A special purpose You must break free... ~10/17/17 Renamed for Poetry Contest "Winter Blues" Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 3/7/2018 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :~) enjoyed reading! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/5/2018 6:53:00 AM
if only we could all break free, great poem thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Hannah - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 10/28/2017 10:37:00 PM
Hannah, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jane Doe
Date: 10/29/2017 3:25:00 AM
Thanks:)
Date: 10/27/2017 11:06:00 PM
A very uplifting poem with exactly the right message. Congrats on your win, Hannah.
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Jane Doe
Date: 10/28/2017 2:05:00 AM
Thank you!!

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