Dangerous Mind

Dangerous Mind

The mind is a most dangerous thing,
Forcing memories into replay,
Endless relived moments drowning bring
Snippets in time more real than today. 
Paralyzing sadness is trouble
Which the mind needs to be addressing. 

Before I died inside, I really tried.

The sleepless mind toys with our heartstrings,
Always knowing our loved one can’t come back.
‘Sorry for your loss’ causes cringing,
Tearful anger and urge to attack.
Remembering makes sadness double,
Sharp edged memories, full of longings. 

Why drive to survive, living isn’t alive.

The mind is also a tricky thing,
Lulling into complacency when
Life together starts out with a ring.
Daily work and play begin to blend
Into a wonderful, safe bubble
That protects against everything.

Love is giving a life worth living.

The unhappy mind prevents planning
For a future without one to love,
Alone, unsafe, fruitlessly scanning
Every crowd for my dearest dove.
Real life bursts that beautiful bubble, 
And now frightened by everything. 

Looked everywhere on Earth for her.

The mind needs a sense of belonging, 
Not at all happy being alone.                                                                 Minds together sing dreams that take wing,             
Unsatisfied by just talk on phone.                                 
The mind stings by the urge to cuddle                        
That knick-knacks and holidays still bring.
          
Be kind to the mind by living to love.         


July 27, 2019
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Bangalee Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 5:53 AM
Love is giving a life worth living./ The unhappy mind prevents planning/ For a future without one to love,/ Alone, unsafe, fruitlessly scanning/ Every crowd for my dearest dove......///written excellently
Masciana Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Your kind thoughts are much appreciated!
La France Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Greg, your pain drips from every word, use poetry as a release, welcome !
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:30 PM
WElcome to Soup, Greg. I'm sorry for your loss I read about at Chantelle's blog. I enjoyed your touching poetry. May you use this poetry site to express your many emotions and learn to enjoy it here!
Nicole Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Within the mind, many moments and memories survive. Yet, the pain- that sweet ache hibernates somewhere as well. And, as we press play and then rewind. Then play once again. The heart lingers even deeper than before. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Brandy
Krutsinger Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:46 PM
Gorgeous poem, Greg. So wise. The mind is all this, for sure! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I do hope you will add more poems.
Masciana Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Thanks, Caren, I do plan to continue poetry.
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