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Dangerous Mind

Dangerous Mind The mind is a most dangerous thing, Forcing memories into replay, Endless relived moments drowning bring Snippets in time more real than today. Paralyzing sadness is trouble Which the mind needs to be addressing. Before I died inside, I really tried. The sleepless mind toys with our heartstrings, Always knowing our loved one can’t come back. ‘Sorry for your loss’ causes cringing, Tearful anger and urge to attack. Remembering makes sadness double, Sharp edged memories, full of longings. Why drive to survive, living isn’t alive. The mind is also a tricky thing, Lulling into complacency when Life together starts out with a ring. Daily work and play begin to blend Into a wonderful, safe bubble That protects against everything. Love is giving a life worth living. The unhappy mind prevents planning For a future without one to love, Alone, unsafe, fruitlessly scanning Every crowd for my dearest dove. Real life bursts that beautiful bubble, And now frightened by everything. Looked everywhere on Earth for her. The mind needs a sense of belonging, Not at all happy being alone. Minds together sing dreams that take wing, Unsatisfied by just talk on phone. The mind stings by the urge to cuddle That knick-knacks and holidays still bring. Be kind to the mind by living to love. July 27, 2019

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Date: 9/8/2019 5:53:00 AM
Love is giving a life worth living./ The unhappy mind prevents planning/ For a future without one to love,/ Alone, unsafe, fruitlessly scanning/ Every crowd for my dearest dove......///written excellently
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Greg Masciana
Date: 9/9/2019 4:50:00 PM
Your kind thoughts are much appreciated!
Date: 8/9/2019 9:37:00 AM
Greg, your pain drips from every word, use poetry as a release, welcome !
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Date: 8/8/2019 8:30:00 PM
WElcome to Soup, Greg. I'm sorry for your loss I read about at Chantelle's blog. I enjoyed your touching poetry. May you use this poetry site to express your many emotions and learn to enjoy it here!
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Date: 8/7/2019 9:27:00 PM
Within the mind, many moments and memories survive. Yet, the pain- that sweet ache hibernates somewhere as well. And, as we press play and then rewind. Then play once again. The heart lingers even deeper than before. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:46:00 PM
Gorgeous poem, Greg. So wise. The mind is all this, for sure! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I do hope you will add more poems.
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Greg Masciana
Date: 8/17/2019 1:53:00 PM
Thanks, Caren, I do plan to continue poetry.

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