Dangerous Glory

This Aphrodite rose
slowly unfurls
pink ombre balms
of sun-kissed 
springfalls, 
as the luminous 
lake of tears
cascade in 
exotic wreaths 
of honey-soaked
velvety sepals, 
there succulent seeds
of zestful dawns adorned
our silken sheets
across luscious meadows 
sprinkled with 
glistening cosmic dust. 
Yet neon streaks
of longing unveiled;
romanticized rainbows
engrossed within
fire opal clouds,
awaiting to drizzle 
pleasing odes,
amalgamated with 
drops of opium 
meant to reveal
   skeletons and secrets, 
sculptured as 
sultry souvenirs 
    of seasonal streams.

But ripples of reminiscences
reflect how 
      you and I
weathered howling winds
through unseelie storms
of oppressed lovers,
gliding in sync 
to the echoes
of midnight screams,
rising from 
sumptuous seas.

So, tonight, as curtains
             fall in 
hues of dusky dews,
cover me in sunrise
when the bleeding heart, 
of blue-laced estuaries, 
rhymes with 
sangria vesper time, 
where tomorrow’s 
ocean ferries
purge prose 
that never denies. 
Let fervent 
pearls pulverize
my colossal tarp
as the morning glows;
I ponder,
do mourning petals show, 
the folly of
moonlit melancholy? 

For you’ve devoured 
the alluring depths
of campfire stories, 
burning 
untouched edges
within our twin souls,
whilst 
    cosmos 
         trembled
               and sighed 
     in poetic ecstasy ~
we seized our 
unsung melody…
For this 
    remains 
             as an 
     untold version 
      of our
           dangerous glory~
  etched on cupid’s 
      amethyst arrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Schatz Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 7:28 PM
Absolutely masterful poem Ink Express! I'm thrown spellbound into some wild, mythic, ethereal, treacherous dimension. The imagery is dazzling! Awesome all around!
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Right this minute no campfire would be able to be built nor would it burn because it is so wet. Thanks for sharing. I live in West Central Georgia USA. Sara K
Greenhough Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:02 PM
An intriguing title and beautiful story of love. I felt a great outdoor ambience in the sparkling words.
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:05 PM
Thank you always for your kind and generous support truly grateful always
One Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Your poem is a masterful exploration of love's nuances, blending rich imagery, mythological references, and a deeply introspective tone. The use of metaphors and vivid language elevates the poem, making it a captivating journey through the complexities of love and connection.. he reference to Aphrodite's rose sets a romantic and mythical tone, immediately evoking themes of love and beauty. Descriptions of the rose unfurling in pink ombre balms conjures images of delicate and sensual blossoming.
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Thank you always for your sweet and sincere support, i uploaded this while you were asleep, pretty early morning i guess so you may have not noticed. But i appreciate you reading always thank you so much
One Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:08 PM
It concludes with a reflection on their dangerous glory, etched on Cupid's amethyst arrow. This metaphorical image suggests a love story that is both captivating and perilous, a unique and untold version of their shared history... I thought I commented on this poem yesterday.. Congratulations on your placement..
Goldsmith Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 8:33 AM
An amazing write. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a great day writing away............
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:24 PM
Ah thank you always dear paula for your generous support
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 8:04 AM
A symphony of poetic devices and ornate diction, adorn your poem--as all your poems do, Ink. Well deserving of all the accolades you receive. --Let fervent pearls pulverize my colossal tarp as the morning glows; I ponder, do mourning petals show, the folly of moonlit melancholy? --awesome!
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:27 PM
Thank you so much dear vijay always for your sincere and generous support. Truly grateful, i appreciate always your poetic presence
Poet Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Your exceptional ability to craft a distinct and captivating world of romance through your exquisite and imaginative use of language is truly amazing dear Ink. The vivid imagery you have employed, coupled with your expert deployment of alliteration, is nothing short of awe-inspiring. Your portrayal of the ethereal essence of romance is truly remarkable. Kudos to you for your outstanding accomplishment. Congratulations on your well-deserved win
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:30 PM
Thank you always dear sotto for your kind and generous support from the very beginning. Im grateful
Herrick Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Got me the vapors from this, Ink Empress. I may have to go to confession. Haha, like I need any encouragement. Very silky flow, like a canvas with word dipped delicacy. I guess we do eat first with our eyes (mind). The choices of words in unison, aesthetically pleasing, because the (mind) is pleased with the associations. Now, to see a Priest about a thing. ;-)
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:36 PM
Ah thank you so much jude, haha about your last line in the comment. I appreciate you reading with an open mind and heart, truly, grateful always
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:24 AM
What a brilliant engaging write! Each word is like a pearl stringing me along to the next. Beautiful imagery and fantastic imagination in how you put it together! Bravo!
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:57 PM
Thank you so very much kind karen you are so sweet appreciate you so very much
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:53 AM
You have drawn your very unique world of romance with your so wonderful and creative diction! You let your avid reader's heart bathe into a so charming world and sip from the nectar of its beauty! Dear Empress, you always amaze and impress! Always an immense delight to be here reading your gems of rarity.. My most sincere wishes for a Happy New Year! Stay always blessed.
Empress Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 12:15 AM
Aw happy new year thank you for visiting my page and for leaving your genuine feedback. Truly grateful for your support
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:46 AM
This Aphrodite rose is magnificent. I bet few would search for a picture of it. It is the setting of a marvellous poem that deserves great applause.
Sharma  Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 11:07 PM
Oh my, this is such a magically romantic poem, dear Ink..Full of ethereal aura of love's rosy ambience, that enchants every heart and makes every moment a dream, unfurling wishes..That first stanza is absolutely ethereal and an impeccable opening with 'Aphrodite Rose' Gosh, I am simply fascinating by its charismatic charm!!! With enticing and riveting descriptions throughout, you've painted a glorious story of passionate affection.."For..our dangerous glory~etched on cupid’s amethyst arrow" Woah
Sharma  Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 11:10 PM
With brilliant alliteration and imageries that make one swoon over ecstacy, this poem quite spellbinds the reader.. Truly magical and enchanting, your word play is absolutely bewitching as always.. Love this one, keep writing and shining!
Onpaper Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 10:47 PM
Aphrodite rose slowly unfurls pink ombre balms of sun-kissed springfalls,...honey soaked velvety sepals,.. zestful dawns adorned our silken sheets across luscious meadows..ooo the sweetnesss!!! skeletons and secrets, sculptured as sultry souvenirs of seasonal streams. Oh hello u sexy alliterator!!! cover me in sunrise… mmmmmmm!!! The bliss in that line!! This piece is gorgeous ae papi .. as always ur words leave me melting in to the floor!! Love it!!
Rhymes Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 9:43 PM
Great alliteration … love the poem …
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 8:34 PM
So lovely, I do like the line, "cover me in sunrise" the warmth of the sun enjoyable to the flesh. Enjoyed reading my friend
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Thank you so very much sweet eve I appreciate your support truly
Seeker Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:48 PM
Simply outstanding as also bewitching and captivating! A fav for sure
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Ah thats a massive compliment, receiving a fav from a poet as talented as you dear seeker, thank you so much truly, grateful
Hind Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:44 PM
Just amazing- showing the tones of dark dangerous love, "cupid's amethyst arrow" - and I'm in your poetic ectasy! Glory, it must not be the reason to love. Another masterful work of art, poetess Ink!
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:08 PM
Awn thank you kind soul, you are truly such a supportive soul, and im forever grateful always for your poetic presence
Silence Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:11 PM
Ahhhh..can I have more than one favorite?? For your poems each time hit me straight in my soul, my beautiful soul sis! Another favorite of mine..the dark sensuality and the anticipation after each verse and line speaks volumes to me! The layers upon layers of your heart, soul and mind here is truly awe inspiring and so divinely soothing to the eyes..you are truly a master of words..connecting emotions into art, the imagery so pleasing, one could drown in it willingly! You are truly a
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:08 PM
My beautiful soul sis, i appreciate you so much for always seeing beauty in my poems and for feeling my words and for being there through it all, im forever grateful for your support always. I hope you know that
Silence Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Favorite poetess of mine..inking brilliance after brilliance! The diversity of your writing is truly amazing! Always so fresh and mesmeric! Human art is what you are, my beautiful soul sis! Can we just pretend I quoted every line above?? I’m shook!
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