Dangerous

Here I go, writing the bare truth with this alter ego,
so nuts I'll go, expressing my thoughts so no one knows as I let go.

I could of wrote this under my own name
but for the thunder of the pain
it'll bring 'cus they'll complain and I can't be bothered to explain.
I can't be tamed, so I'll relieve my brain and no one is named.

I'm talking about those two demon siblings
who stand as one hurting my feelings like true villains.
They are my own who I disown
and boot out of my life so they become unknown.
Right after I confront them face to face with no remorse,
with my outburst of rage set for a collision course,
even if I hurt them they've still hurt me worse,
they made my mind go berserk,
two nasty jerks with embarrassing quirks.

Looking down on me as though I'm a peasant
but at present I'm isolated and feel unpleasant,
so they better keep a distance 
'cus I'm worn down by the persistent 
refusal to include my presence,
they are rude so I've no resistance 
left to prevent a handing out of pain and it is possible 
that in this event I will be unstoppable,
they've been to cruel and hurtful to not be evil,
so when I'm done they wont be able to crawl or move at all,
it'll be brutally horrid but enjoyable
watching as they go off to hospital,
and what the hell if I end up in jail,
I would have been so loyal 
but that's been spoiled.
Thank god I got to see what a relation can be,
before all this it was something I could not see.

Now I'm gracious as I know where my place is,
but my god if I see their faces
I'll behave outrageous,
I gave and was betrayed,
they've made me dangerous,
and I'll get locked away but they are the ones that belong in cages.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/23/2022 1:51:00 PM
Wow! You have an amazing talent with using rhyme within your poem to help portray your message so strongly! I definitely understood your message and I can understand this feeling because I have it towards a few people I've encountered in life. I admire your courage to release this raw emotion at the core of humanity. Very well done! I do hope you never act on it! LOL!
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