Danger Zone

Splenderous scent, dazzling emerald eyes, smoke and flames, melting with desire. 
Red lights flashing, I'm on fire, crashing through the mirror, Danger zone! I'm under 
her spell, magical fingers touching me everywhere. Suciside curves, long red hair 
wrapped around my body, reeling me in, soft angel skin, oh such a sin.

Leather and lace, satin and silk, can't catch my breath, don't have a clue where's up 
or down. One thing for certain, I'm in melt down, all gages are red, looks like I'm in 
over my head. Can't focus my eyes, heart is thumping like a giant jack hammer. Time 
to pull the rip-cord, I'm bailing out, screaming I love you in an echoing shout. 

Landed on the floor right next to my bed, sweat on my forehead, wild eyed looking 
all around. Don't smell a thing, don't hear a sound. Was all this a dream? Can't 
figure it out, do know this, it was eerily real. I cruised the Danger zone, oh man 
what a thrill!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/25/2011 11:05:00 AM
The way you describe in short bursts is the perfect way to explain the passion you're dreaming of. I wish I could write like this and have the same effect this poem brings, well done sir Kyle
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your gracious and kind comment...much appreciated kind sir..........Old Jack
Date: 7/25/2011 10:14:00 AM
nice comparison....keep up the writing, I too have had these dreams.....(just don't tell my wife okay?) (:
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 10:55:00 AM
Thank you kind sir for your gracious and kind comment on danger zone, much appreciated....no worries my lips are sealed...lol, Old Jack
Date: 7/25/2011 1:54:00 AM
ehhehehheh, sounds like you almost been an gone...watch them passionate women...some of em are too strong.... stay away from the green apples ....or you will be gone.. Good on you old cobber Jack, Don
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 10:57:00 AM
lol, thanks a whold bunches my Aussie Gent Mate....think maybe I am a little green apple...lol.....Old Jack
Date: 7/24/2011 4:31:00 PM
Very creative peice humorously ending, Jack
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/24/2011 6:47:00 PM
Whew! thank you so much Dr. Ram, means a great deal to get a kind and gracious comment from a Kind Gent like you. Your writing says so much, wisdom and grace...Thanks again.........Old Jack
Date: 7/24/2011 3:23:00 PM
Creative work..Kinda funny in the end..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/24/2011 6:49:00 PM
Thanks Sara you are so kind, thank you for taking the time for this....very much appreciated Lovely Lady.....with Love....Old Jack
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