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This café table watched how love has grown But kept the playboy’s secrets, all unknown; While his girl believed in one heart for two Admiring a charmer's vow, ‘It is you’… Till mad table quaked spilling his black list Of young models’ faces, polished and kissed; Whoops! Her kung fu skills chopped those loins, he bled Now, a warning roars…’ MORE DANGER AHEAD ! ’ ````````````` 10/20/2016 Warning Contest of Viv Wigley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/23/2016 1:59:00 PM
Clever write, and amusing, enjoyed the poem
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Date: 10/23/2016 8:41:00 AM
Hahahaha! Lots of fun. Great entry for this contest.
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Date: 10/22/2016 4:45:00 PM
Nette this a fun and clever write for the contest, Best of luck
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Date: 10/21/2016 8:30:00 AM
Haha! A great lesson accompanied by a greater poem! Good luck dear, nette!
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Date: 10/21/2016 7:25:00 AM
Great write ... GL ...
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Date: 10/21/2016 3:32:00 AM
- Viv, will love this ....... and me too :) - Good luck in the contest, Nette :) - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2016 11:57:00 PM
Oh la la!!!!! :)
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Date: 10/20/2016 4:52:00 PM
Oh brother, you're a cheeky monkey! :) Uniquely creative.
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Date: 10/20/2016 12:21:00 PM
Love the personified table nette...cant stand the playboys
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Date: 10/20/2016 12:17:00 PM
Wow, I like the humor and the punchy message." Never underestimate the power of a woman, tep! Outstanding best-seller on my shelf!
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Date: 10/20/2016 11:56:00 AM
This is great Annette! Good luck lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 10/20/2016 11:56:00 AM
Oops autocorrect...lol
Date: 10/20/2016 11:50:00 AM
Nette, I am not sure if you have any idea how relevant this poem is to me today, from the first line to the last. You probably also have no idea how much I needed to hear(read) this today. This is fantastic and I hope it wins the contest.
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