Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

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Danger Ahead

This café table watched how love has grown
But kept the playboy’s secrets, all unknown;
While his girl believed in one heart for two
Admiring a charmer's vow, ‘It is you’…
Till mad table quaked spilling his black list
Of young models’ faces, polished and kissed;
Whoops! Her kung fu skills chopped those loins, he bled
Now, a warning roars…’ MORE DANGER AHEAD ! ’


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10/20/2016
Warning Contest of Viv Wigley

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Old Man Emu October 23, 2016 at 1:59 PM Clever write, and amusing, enjoyed the poem

Maurice Yvonne October 23, 2016 at 8:41 AM Hahahaha! Lots of fun. Great entry for this contest.

Constance La France October 22, 2016 at 4:45 PM Nette this a fun and clever write for the contest, Best of luck

Demetrios Trifiatis October 21, 2016 at 8:30 AM Haha! A great lesson accompanied by a greater poem! Good luck dear, nette!

Probir Gupta October 21, 2016 at 7:25 AM Great write ... GL ...

Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2016 at 3:32 AM - Viv, will love this ....... and me too :) - Good luck in the contest, Nette :) - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso October 20, 2016 at 11:57 PM Oh la la!!!!! :)

Paloma P October 20, 2016 at 4:52 PM Oh brother, you're a cheeky monkey! :) Uniquely creative.

Tim Smith October 20, 2016 at 12:21 PM Love the personified table nette...cant stand the playboys

Ashley Conte October 20, 2016 at 12:17 PM Wow, I like the humor and the punchy message." Never underestimate the power of a woman, tep! Outstanding best-seller on my shelf!

Beautiful Scars October 20, 2016 at 11:56 AM This is great Annette! Good luck lovely lady :)-luloo Beautiful Scars October 20, 2016 at 11:56 AM Oops autocorrect...lol

Chris Green October 20, 2016 at 11:50 AM Nette, I am not sure if you have any idea how relevant this poem is to me today, from the first line to the last. You probably also have no idea how much I needed to hear(read) this today. This is fantastic and I hope it wins the contest.