Danger

The void is so deep
Mountain touches sky earth quakes
Ground trembles avoid
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Empress Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:54 AM
It is quite terrifying and youv captured it all so very vividly dear Pascal, in few syllables how youv painted imagery is truly impressive and so very visceral. Pleasure reading ~ sending you light always. Thank you so much for your thoughtful compliment about my poetry on a poem’s comment of mine. I just saw it and I am grateful sincerely, Keep writing, shining, and sharing ~
Borg Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 2:07 PM
The light you send, Ink, is blinding. Thank you for your comments.
Rolland Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 1:01 PM
feel so sad for Venezuela, always care, merci
Borg Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 2:21 PM
It is many years since I last was in Caracas and Isla Margarita. Beautiful country and wonderful people! Sad indeed the latest happenings. Thank you Yann for taking the time to read my tiny contribution.
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