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Dandelions

Daring dandelions, dance in the summer breeze. Disgusted gardeners do everything to destroy the puff balls, while dear children make a wish, displaying innocence. 8/14/16

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2016 5:41:00 PM

Oh this is absolutely charming Kim - the ending is perfect - I am sure we all blew dandelion clocks when we were children - now i destroy the dandleions as soon as I see the flowerheads ... how things change!:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:36:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/29/2016 6:12:00 AM

So true Kim, but I found out they are welcome in Bavaria. There are hills and fields of golden dandelions in springtime and they let them grow wild. They were breathtaking. I enjoyed your pretty pleiades! 7 ;+)

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:36:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!