Dandelions

Daring dandelions,
dance in the summer breeze.
Disgusted gardeners
do everything to
destroy the puff balls, while
dear children make a wish,
displaying innocence.

8/14/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Oh this is absolutely charming Kim - the ending is perfect - I am sure we all blew dandelion clocks when we were children - now i destroy the dandleions as soon as I see the flowerheads ... how things change!:-) hugs jan xx
Merryman Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 6:12 AM
So true Kim, but I found out they are welcome in Bavaria. There are hills and fields of golden dandelions in springtime and they let them grow wild. They were breathtaking. I enjoyed your pretty pleiades! 7 ;+)
Merryman Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Connie!
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