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Dandelions

green fingers plucked you to become prima donnas of the dumping site on a sandy grave poverty's roses are placed by sorrowful hearts

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/24/2013 11:50:00 PM

love the haiku David,,,, thank you for reading my Pitch Perfect Dreams" I'm the kind of person the glass is always 90% full ;} you have an awesome ;}

David De La Croes
Date: 6/25/2013 12:19:00 AM

Thank you Debbie. Great meeting you... David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2013 12:30:00 AM

really loving your poetry. This is a great tribute for dandelions.

David De La Croes
Date: 6/14/2013 1:02:00 AM

I appreciate your comments, Andrea. I try to find meaning in the simple things... David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2013 12:27:00 PM

i just love it... LINDA

David De La Croes
Date: 5/22/2013 8:05:00 AM

Thanks, Linda!

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/15/2013 7:47:00 AM

This hit hard for me. Very strong Haiku here. Excellent job!

David De La Croes
Date: 5/15/2013 7:58:00 AM

I appreciate your comments, Drake. The poor are often discarded to the fringes of society, but with little resources they can find strength to endure... David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2013 7:24:00 AM

Great expressive and emotive work expressing the beauty of the dandelion and the loss of a loved one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Dandelions were brought over here as a food source by the first settlers..The leaves can be eaten as a bitter herb and the flowers are edible also..I think that they have medicinal benefits also..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

David De La Croes
Date: 5/15/2013 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for your informative comments, Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2013 7:08:00 AM

- Lovely, David - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)