Dandelions

Sustained by the frequent spring showers Adorned by rosettes of dark green They burst into dense yellow flowers The florets parading their sheen. They sway to sensations of pleasure The rhythmic allure of the breeze Then rest in the evening at leisure, Appear every day to increase. But soon comes the time for reversal The petals are destined to dry, Then globules of seeds for dispersal To nature’s intentions comply. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This poem merits to win for the simple reason that dandelions are ill-treated and spoken of badly by many people, little realizing the beauty and good points which they have to share with us. Placed 3rd in Richard Lamoureux's contest © 12th April 2019

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/5/2020 4:31:00 PM

I like when the dandelions bloom. Great poem, Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/7/2020 2:45:00 PM

I have always looked at dandelions as lovely and inspiring flowers, Angela. Thank you for reading and liking. Regards // paul

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 11/19/2019 11:39:00 AM

I think dandelions are beautiful. Where I live they, as much as violets, are a harbinger of spring. Unfortunately lawn fanatics can't wait to spray a herbicide on their lawns and kill them. Wonderful flow and rhymes in this poem, Paul. / M

Paul Callus
Date: 11/22/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice. Your feedback is truly appreciated. Glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/27/2019 11:08:00 PM

Hello Paul … I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem and the topic also. Even though the dandelion can be despised, many of us poets write about dandelions. I think they are wonderful - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting, Lindsay. Maybe I could tempt you to try dandelion wine:) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/9/2019 1:40:00 PM

Hello Paul, I love this poem. Dandelions brightens up a dull lawn. people eat the leaves, and make the wine. all from this weed. have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2019 1:50:00 PM

Yes, there are many uses for dandelions, Darlene. Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2019 2:29:00 PM

Just back to say hello. Have to rush today and I am sure I have seen all your recent poems I can see!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/7/2019 3:29:00 PM

:) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 3:36:00 PM

Is this another non-winner? I think mine was too. You did wonderfully with the theme, Paul. I like that you made it succinct as well. I think I will get off here now for the day. So much else I should be doing, like for example, writing some poems!!! Thanks again for your fave.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/7/2019 3:28:00 PM

Thank you for coming back, Andrea....funny, but I am sure that I had replied to your original comment! You hit the nail on the head...another non-winner, I'm afraid! Pleased that you enjoyed it. ~ Warm regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2019 8:17:00 AM

Hi Paul, Spring is in the air, flowers pop up everywhere, and then die only to disperse their seeds, which will germinate and hibernate until Spring awakens them again next year - a never ending circle of seasons and flowers. A serene and beautiful poem Paul. Warm regard and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/27/2019 8:56:00 AM

Indeed, spring is in the air, Jenny!! The weather here has gradually changed, and now it is mostly fine and warm...time to start swimming:) Thank you for your delightful comments, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/25/2019 7:18:00 AM

Loved the flow. You always do so well with that, my dear. Beautiful choice of words as well. Sending hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2019 9:21:00 AM

Dear Eileen...how lovely to see you back! You have been missed, though I understand your life has been a busy one. Thank you for your lovely comments. Regards & Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2019 4:23:00 AM

This poem has the lyrical quality that I search for in poetry Paul. I can't believe it wasn't on the list. It is going into my faves. Just beautiful tribute to the dandelion! : ) xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2019 8:49:00 AM

I am so pleased that you liked it, Connie, and the fav is much appreciated....thank you!! ~ Warm regards // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/18/2019 7:16:00 PM

A wonderful poem and an absolute joy to read! Loved the rhyming in this, too!! ... Good luck in the contest Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/19/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comments, Kelly. A pleasure to have you visiting. Hope all is well on your side of the fence :) Warm regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2019 9:42:00 AM

Ha ha, I hope it tastes better than others I have tried.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2019 4:04:00 PM

Of course, nothing beats grape wine!

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/17/2019 8:15:00 PM

Exquisitely done my great friend! They burst forth it seems almost overnight, parade their worth and then cast their seeds. Your description nails it.. A fav..

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2019 4:05:00 PM

I'm so pleased to have you stopping by, my friend. Thank you for the comments and the fav. Wishing you a happy Easter. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2019 11:57:00 AM

- Dandelion is really a sunshine smile ... - A beautiful poem, Paul :) - GL in the contest :) - I wish you a wonderful Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/17/2019 3:26:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, Anne-Lise:) May you also have a happy Easter. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2019 9:50:00 AM

You make dandelions cool.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/17/2019 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, Richard....and I make dandelion wine, too :) Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/17/2019 3:59:00 AM

Very nicely done, Paul:)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/17/2019 7:42:00 AM

Pleased you liked it, Jo. Thank you and regards // paul

Ricky Muse

Date: 4/16/2019 7:06:00 PM

Nice Paul. Vivid and personal. Just the way I like it.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/17/2019 7:42:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. I have just been reading several of your poems (though did not comment on all) which for lack of time I had somewhat neglected. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2019 7:17:00 PM

delicately crafted to highlight a dandelion's transformation... this is a gem, paul... huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/15/2019 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. Your lovely comments make this second visit even more appreciated. Hugs // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/14/2019 1:11:00 PM

A wonderful painting by an artist! I can see your brush drawing and colouring your well chosen and effective words.. I can see your dandelions dancing with the breeze then "complying with nature" to meet their fate! But your "Dandelions" won't "disperse or dry"! rather stand tall in the realm of beauty and poetry.. A win and a FAV. Deepest regards, Paul, and blessings.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2019 1:34:00 PM

Your insightful comments encourage no end, Besma, and the fav is very much appreciated, too. ~ Warm regards and blessings to you as well. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/13/2019 2:35:00 PM

I think that Chuck Melugin in his comment below has summed up both you and your poem Paul, absolutely breathtaking - good luck in the contest. Warm regards and poetry hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2019 1:19:00 PM

You are too kind, my friend :) Always a pleasure to read your comments. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/13/2019 12:41:00 PM

Paul: So enjoyed this. Wonderful images and rhyme scheme. I love that you gave us their natural cycle. I live where we put dandelions in salads and make dandelion wine (which is like drinking salad from a bottle). This was just delightful!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2019 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Edlynn. I have tried dandelion wine...I suppose the taste depends a lot on who makes it:) Hope you're enjoying the weekend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2019 12:28:00 PM

oh I would love it if the film went to Malta. I see no new poem of yours to read and I am just here making final comments (I don't actually leave till tomorrow morning and soon I am going with the grandkids to see Dumbo!!) Ciao, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2019 12:53:00 PM

I presume you are now on your way, Andrea. Have a good time! Best regards // paul

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/13/2019 10:19:00 AM

Bloom Beauty complemented by poetic beauty from an awesome poet!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you for the generous comments, Chuck...much appreciated. Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/13/2019 12:28:00 AM

The humble dandelion gets a bad press but I think its a bright little flower that brings colour to the garden. Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2019 5:05:00 AM

You are right, Tom. I have learned to appreciate wild flowers since I began taking more interest in their visible and not so visible characteristics. I have even made a whole collection of the wild flowers growing in my locality. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2019 5:49:00 PM

You described the process exactly, Paul. Very nicely done! And well metered too. I came here to thank you for your words at Carolyn's blog and also to tell you about the trailers. Richard had me write 5 or 6 poems for trailers. But I suppose only if the movie sells will those trailers ever be seen. I have not seen if he even did them or not. Crossing my fingers anyway!!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2019 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Whatever the outcome of the film, you are already a winner in my eyes. I keep hoping that this film will take part in the Malta Film Festival or the Valletta Film Festival, both of which have become popular. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/12/2019 4:36:00 PM

ohh yes, you covered the beauty and frailty of this flower, paul... such an incredible read!...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/12/2019 5:03:00 PM

Your generous words are appreciated, Nette:) Thank you. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul