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A dandelion flower as a child I was told if picked you would wet your bed I gazed lovingly for hours at her bright yellow flowers something I did instead... My dilemma to pick or not to pick was is it true what picking a flower would do or did she play a real mean trick so I'd never pick those bright yellow flowers that I lovingly gazed at for hours and hours My 'bestie' named Rosie had left me perplexed in a quandary not knowing what I should do next... Then one sunny day in the month May just as I was passing with questions unanswered still floating round inside my head Upon drawing closer to my utter dismay her bright yellow flowers had all gone away Instead what was left were fluffy white balls like gossamer wings exquisite ~ so fine and softly I blew the most gentle of breaths as they floated like fairies translucent ~ divine Though I'm now an adult I've still never picked a dandelion flower her words hold such power For Rosie my 'bestie' cajoled and convinced me never to pick them that this tale was true So now I ask you ... Do you know? Have you picked one? Did a dandelion make you wet your bed? Or have I been well and truly mislead... Written 1st April 2019 Contest: Dandelions Sponsor: Line Gauthier 3rd Place Contest Brian's Choice L Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 5/19/2020 7:30:00 PM
Wonderful poem about childhood friendships ! Congratulations !!!!
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Date: 5/19/2020 4:49:00 PM
Great poem and congratulations! PS: The name dandelion comes from the French: Les dents du Lion (Lion's Teeth) - which I guess they look like in their yellow form before they slowly turn white.
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Date: 4/24/2019 7:15:00 AM
Not true as far as my experience. I grew up thinking how blessed I was that no one cared when I picked them to bring home as flowers. Loved your story Ann. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/24/2019 8:13:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed my poem Connie and thanks for your congrats and visit, which is always appreciated. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/7/2019 9:07:00 AM
Another story about the dandelions states that if a child picks the tallest dandelion stalk in spring it will show much they will grow in the coming year..Nicely penned Ann
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/7/2019 7:39:00 PM
Oh I have not heard that tale before Joseph, thank you for your visit, much appreciated. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/2/2019 12:43:00 PM
I regularly eat them in salad; pick'em all of the time...nope, bed's dry! Think of all of the nutrients you missed. Beautifully done; you have a very colorful friend.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/2/2019 2:47:00 PM
Oh do you ML, that is interesting and so glad you are not wetting your bed, haha. Many thanks for your lovely comments, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/1/2019 7:28:00 PM
What a fantastic poetical story for the contest! Good luck, Ann. I think it is a winner. I have picked so many dandelions it is nuts, but I have wet my bed too; not sure if there was a correlation or not.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/2/2019 2:46:00 PM
Hahaha...you do make me laugh Caren! Thank you so much for your great comments, I really appreciate them. Kinest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/1/2019 4:43:00 PM
Wonderful poem for the dandelion. I have picked many.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/1/2019 4:50:00 PM
Ah, but did they make you wet the bed, haha. Thank you so much for your lovely comment John, I appreciate your visit, so nice to meet you. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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