Dandelion Wishing

Breathtaking. One can feel the hope through your lovely innocent words. Exquisite writing on a special moment and to wonder what our wish would be today. I think this is my favourite for the emotions it evokes and how beautifully you have captured it. fave, 7+ lynnxxx this form is a first for me and your soft words fit divinely. your words would be a cherished gift embossed on a first journal book for any young girl, a sweet reminder to savor life, there is no hurry.:-)

"Spring's sun-gold heads" I like that. Missed it the first time. Congrats. Love, daver

Looks like an older poem getting new life, Andrea. It's lovely. Isn't it amazing how we seem to always be wishing our lives away, especially when we're young.

"Blowing fluff," that's a good one. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

congrats Andrea on a great first place win luv..

Another great write Andrea...when will the book come out? :) Jon

Remember it well. I also used to like to fluff the cat a nine tails. Hadn't thought about that for a while. Don't know if you had those in IowA. Thanks. And congratulations

Congratulations on your placement Andrea. Love, Carol

A Fav!!

An excellent write on sweet memories.Congrats Andrea on your win.

Congratulations Andrea (Catching up from a week away) x

sweetest of cheers to you for the top win, andie! .. glad to share the spot with ya!... congrats ; so crisp a write!:)huggs!

Wonderful write!This form is very interesting!-kashinath

Enjoyed reading your work this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

A lovey expression of the treasured past Andrea you write supremely well, oh by the way Eileen was a co worker that collected anything frogs so one day I thought it would be nice to add a custom poem to her collection =)

This is just beautiful Andrea--it brings out such nostalgic feelings--your first stanza is just filled with wonderful imagery, actually your whole poem oozes with it--I know this will be in the winners list--hehe it's better be ;)

Great Dim. Hex, Andrea. Your wish came true, time does pass quickly. Good luck in the contest.

Dear Andrea, My Wife LENORE was The Great POETESS that Wrote a very Similar POEM and JUST as Beautiful as YOUR Expressed POETIC ART in this Superb Write YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Hi Andrea, I have been under the impression that you are allowed to enter a contest and later, within the contest period, change it to something better. A note to the sponsor would be helpful, though. Especially if they have already read your poem and filed it into a judging category. I have changed poems in the past. I think I even placed with one, too. Good luck. You are right. The contests are going very fast! Take care, Andrea. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Remember the song "Dandelion" by the Rolling Stones? That is what your poem reminded me of. Fine work - and a new form on me! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Great write on a tough form. Good luck in the contest.

Great write on a tough form. Good luck in the contest.

This is really good, I could feel the breeze at the end!

Dear Andrea, Excellent sure to be a Winner I read a POEM like this 40 Years ago by another Great POETESS Good Luck in Catie's Contest I will Write again when YOU Win LOVE ALWAYS ...HG

GREAT! good luck in this contest.. u did a marvelous job with this form.. two more contests posted right now also.. get going girlfriend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..