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Dandelion Wishes

dandelion fuzz
    released into the air
       by a wish --
childhood dreams scatter
to places unknown


3/24/15

childhooddreamtanka

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Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2015 at 2:49 PM

Congrats..Sara

Eve Roper

March 29, 2015 at 10:05 AM

Beautiful poem, brings back memories of the things we did when we were children. A 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve

Mohan Chutani

March 28, 2015 at 11:34 PM

Kim, this is a beautiful magical wish Tanka. Congrats. Mohan

Debbie Guzzi

March 28, 2015 at 7:11 PM

So nice to enjoy your verse this cold snowy evening. Light & Love

John Lawless

March 28, 2015 at 1:35 PM

Way to go Kim. Congrats on the top...

Sandra Haight

March 28, 2015 at 12:58 PM

Wow, Kim, this is magnificent! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 12:27 PM

Lovely tanka. Congratulations, Kim! :)

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 28, 2015 at 11:38 AM

Very nice. Congrats.

Joseph May

March 28, 2015 at 11:12 AM

Congrats on a great win Kim

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2015 at 10:07 AM

Oh, I do so love this !! Wonderful tanka, and softly sentimental !! Congratulations to you, Kim !

Constance La France

March 28, 2015 at 7:19 AM

Kim, your tanka is beautiful and dreamy, congratulations on your first place win in the contest, a perfect 7 rating . . .

Jan Allison

March 28, 2015 at 5:41 AM

I knew this would fly Kim - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2015 at 12:25 AM

Wow, Kim. BLOW me away. guess what? I have done a very similar poem myself but in etheree form. so of course I love this one!!! Congrats on number one. the ending of yours is PERFECTO!!