Dandelion

"peeled off by the wind" . I am betting you are the only person that had described it that way.Love it:)

Whenever I think of dandelions, I always remember chasing the seeds as a child, and carrying them so carefully so as not to knock the 'fluff' off. Kat x

My son likes to blow the seeds off of them. Nice work.

This is lovely Raul!

aww sweet, its funny when we are as kids and like to blow the seeds of the dandelions, my children like it and I showed a little boy in nursery as he is new in Uk, we used to say what time is it them blow and count 1 2 3 untill no seeds were left so much fun, a great write, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane

Reminds of when i was younger, purely to blow the fluff and seeds, nice write, James

You sure have the HAIKU form off to a fine art my friend! Well don indeed!! Best wishes, Keith

You have truly mastered this verse form, Raul. Each one you write scores a home run!

pure haiku fun! Raul! love it...Jim

I appreciate the way the last line puts the scene into motion. Thanks.

Interesting nice job though oh and if you wanna check that out its not hard to find its "named" finished finnaly..now what to name it lol

great!!! i love the last line!!!

I can't stand them however they have a soft spot in my heart as well. They are usually some of the first flowers kids pick for their moms. If you can separate them from their seed capabilities they are quite a happy sort of flower and the the white globes aren't bad either. Your title drew me in

Brilliant again my friend...the last two lines are perfection.