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Tearing asunder out of the obscurity of my cloak with elation I climb azure skies to melodies of moods throughout my spiritual wavelength the whirling swarm to cumulonimbus cloud.
Written: February 09, 2022 1st place contest winner A STRAND (1070) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/11/2022 7:36:00 PM
Very interesting write! Different. Love the second verse and the final line. Well done. Congratulations, Lasaad!
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Date: 2/10/2022 11:03:00 PM
Back to your poem with Congratulations on your great win dear Lasaad !
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Date: 2/9/2022 8:54:00 PM
Lasaad, I'm not a dancer, but this poem certainly dances beautifully on its astral toes above the clouds! Rhythmic...ab
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Date: 2/9/2022 7:22:00 PM
Rise higher and higher cutting across the dark clouds and go waltzing in ether weightless. Beautiful image and lovely composition
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Date: 2/9/2022 3:59:00 PM
I like the photo and the waltzing imagery you created, Lasaad.
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