Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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Dancing With the Stars

Tearing asunder
out of the obscurity of my cloak
with elation

I climb azure skies
to melodies of
moods

throughout
my spiritual wavelength
the whirling swarm
to cumulonimbus cloud.

Written: February 09, 2022

1st place contest winner 


A STRAND (1070) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Kim Rodrigues February 11, 2022 at 7:36 PM Very interesting write! Different. Love the second verse and the final line. Well done. Congratulations, Lasaad!

Valsa George February 10, 2022 at 11:03 PM Back to your poem with Congratulations on your great win dear Lasaad !

Anselmo Boles February 9, 2022 at 8:54 PM Lasaad, I'm not a dancer, but this poem certainly dances beautifully on its astral toes above the clouds! Rhythmic...ab

Valsa George February 9, 2022 at 7:22 PM Rise higher and higher cutting across the dark clouds and go waltzing in ether weightless. Beautiful image and lovely composition

Vijay Pandit February 9, 2022 at 3:59 PM I like the photo and the waltzing imagery you created, Lasaad.