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Dancing With Bones

Once upon a time we were falling in love Now you look down from up above Once I was as free as a dove Now I sit alone in this dark conner Friends turned to strangers, loner My heart does not work, and there is no suitable donner My tears for you have put out my hearts fire You no longer sit and stoke my hearts pire You were the conductor of my heart's choir No more concerts or melodies, can't harmonize. My tears are as numerous as the stars You inquire about my heart, I have locked it behind bars. All these thought come to mind, New scars. Deeper, bloodier, cry harder. The seven seas can not contain tears nor soothe my fears, of living a live without your caresses AND now, I can only think as I watch you sink to the floor: Four feet, we could of been four Five feet, only had to wait five weeks more Six feet, and once more my tears pour

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Date: 10/2/2017 3:09:00 AM
love your work, keep writting
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:04:00 AM
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Date: 9/7/2016 1:09:00 PM
Penehafo H.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Penehafo Hamunyela
Date: 9/14/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome
Date: 9/7/2016 11:14:00 AM
Penehafo Hamunyela, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Penehafo Hamunyela
Date: 9/14/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you SKAT A

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