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Dancing When the Song Ends

To turn slowly turn, hold the wind for fleeting moments, turn around to see you swaying ever gently in the breeze, to know just to know, by a squint in your eye, or a line upon your face that creases when you smile, that love is something often best not put into words.

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Date: 1/1/2024 3:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:04:00 PM
JUNIOR enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:18:00 PM
Junior, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2008 12:17:00 PM
Hi sweet My goodness this is so beautiful. The visual sentiment is very enduring to ones heart. So very true too. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my latest "Fork In The Road" I appreciate it. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/5/2008 7:51:00 AM
you have a gift for words,and trust me ,since I first started writing this has gotten me far.maybe Ill share my book with you
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Date: 8/5/2008 7:48:00 AM
Very deep poem and I mean this,some give opinons to advance as far as numbers,I love poetry and really like this poem.
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