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Dancing To the Song of a Loon

Dappled light shimmered from a golden moon, and peered into a grove of bent willow trees. Arched branches swayed in a gentle breeze, as if shadow dancing to the song of a loon as she warbled the lyrics of her mating tune. July 15, 2022 Bite Size Poem No 49 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 2:41:00 PM

Delightful, Jenna ~

Ann Peck

Date: 7/26/2022 8:04:00 AM

Your poem is enchanting. I was spellbound ~ truly. Congratulations! I'm faving.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/26/2022 12:12:00 PM

aww thanks ever so much for your lovely thoughts, Ann.

John Watt

Date: 7/25/2022 10:43:00 PM

Jenna, your imagery is so artistically arranged, it is like reading a bucolic painting, if that makes any sense. Lovely rhymes along with lulling phrases... I liked "as if shadow dancing to the song of a loon" most. Very nice writing in this compact form ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/26/2022 12:12:00 PM

John, I am always so excited to read your comments to discern what line(s) you preferred. It stimulates my mind to comprehend what touches your poetic senses. I'm always appreciative of your visits.