Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Dancing To the Song of a Loon

Dappled light shimmered from a golden moon,
and peered into a grove of bent willow trees.
Arched branches swayed in a gentle breeze,
as if shadow dancing to the song of a loon
as she warbled the lyrics of her mating tune.



July 15, 2022
Bite Size Poem No 49 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier November 10, 2022 at 2:41 PM Delightful, Jenna ~

Ann Peck July 26, 2022 at 8:04 AM Your poem is enchanting. I was spellbound ~ truly. Congratulations! I'm faving. Jenna Logan July 26, 2022 at 12:12 PM aww thanks ever so much for your lovely thoughts, Ann.

John Watt July 25, 2022 at 10:43 PM Jenna, your imagery is so artistically arranged, it is like reading a bucolic painting, if that makes any sense. Lovely rhymes along with lulling phrases... I liked "as if shadow dancing to the song of a loon" most. Very nice writing in this compact form ~ John Jenna Logan July 26, 2022 at 12:12 PM John, I am always so excited to read your comments to discern what line(s) you preferred. It stimulates my mind to comprehend what touches your poetic senses. I'm always appreciative of your visits.

Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2022 at 10:21 PM This bite size entry is so lovely Jenna. Congratulations on your HM. Blessings xxoo Jenna Logan July 26, 2022 at 12:10 PM I'm very pleased that you liked it, Connie. Thanks!

Paula Goldsmith July 25, 2022 at 9:03 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away. Jenna Logan July 26, 2022 at 12:09 PM Thanks very much, Paula.

Chris Conn July 15, 2022 at 3:49 PM That may be illegal in 49 states. Jenna Logan July 15, 2022 at 4:20 PM Are you accusing the moon of being immoral? Tsk. Tsk.

L Milton Hankins July 15, 2022 at 12:59 PM Lovely, Jenna. Reads like a winner to me! L Milton Hankins July 16, 2022 at 9:41 AM Me, too, actually. Jenna Logan July 15, 2022 at 1:20 PM Thank you for the encouraging thought, but I've stopped second guessing about contest results.

Linda Alice Fowler July 15, 2022 at 8:44 AM I love this Jenna. Quite the imagery and sensory stimulation! Linda Jenna Logan July 15, 2022 at 10:13 AM Thank you very much for your lovely remarks, Linda. I'm so pleased that you like it.