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Dancing the Unicorn

Where fancy's flowers bloom, I go,
and music starts to play.
And when sweet words of beauty flow,
I dip and and weave and sway. . . 

Then comes a white horse, my delight,
so I'll not be forlorn.
In step with him, I freely write.
I dance the unicorn.

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2012

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Francis J Grasso Date: 6/10/2016 8:56:00 AM Andrea, this poem is lovely! How absolutely beautiful! "Some day.... I'll find that magic unicorn"! ...Fran Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 7/31/2013 8:22:00 AM Thanks for dropping by, old friend. I went way back for this one and found that you have always been first rate with your poetry. I can't seem to get any inspiration these days and rather than write poor stuff I'll be satisfied with commenting for a while. Love, daver Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/19/2013 2:26:00 PM Just stopping by to say 'Hi' Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/21/2012 5:26:00 PM I don't think i asked for names.... if that is the reason you will not enter... that is your choice... i don't mind.... you can do what every other poet did... just entered my contest... anyways...thanks for letting me know why, you can't enter my contest...xox...pd...I'm waiting for the contest to close tonight..hopefully,,, that way i can post all the missing contest... The "SHH Contest" and the Pooping contest" & long poem" contest. By the looks of it, it might close in a bit.. always pd Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 4/22/2012 6:00:00 AM Interesting title, Andrea, followed up by your usual flare of words and ideas.:) Beautiful visions to start the day with. Oh, thank you! Have always loved the unicorn, an unbeliever had said that the remains found had been that of a narwhale. I think that he'd lucked out on creativity and imagination.:) You "dance the unicorn" beautifully here. Best wishes, Mikki Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 4/11/2012 9:07:00 AM Wonderful unicorn. Loved always bl and thanks for reading my write. bl Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/10/2012 1:47:00 PM Andrea, congrats on your win! This is such a lovely write. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/10/2012 7:16:00 AM A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/8/2012 12:51:00 AM Congratulations Andrea!Loved it!! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/7/2012 12:06:00 PM Congratulations on your win Andie. This was light and lovely! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/7/2012 9:08:00 AM congrats Andrea on a super win for this terrific write luv.. Brian chose some great poems for his winners list.. this is fabulous.. luv.. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 4/5/2012 8:24:00 PM Is the unicorn a new dance step? Or are you using the image as a metaphor for imagination? Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2012 8:34:00 PM YOu are very perceptive, Matt it is a metaphor for imagination and also the title of one of my chapbooks I have for sell at Shadowpoetry)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/5/2012 8:14:00 PM ha ha..I'm just gonna say one thing... ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES~~ love it love it..always.. your little PD... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/5/2012 7:32:00 PM Enjoyed reading this one..It has great poetic quality with excellent flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Thanks for stopping by..Your encouraging comments always lift my spirits..Sara Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 4/5/2012 1:40:00 PM this sounds like it's already a famous poem. it just flows so magically - i love it! Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/5/2012 1:26:00 PM Nice fanciful write Andrea. love phyl soup mail Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/5/2012 12:09:00 PM Love this fantasy dance. Children would love it too. Just the kid coming out in you, Andrea. Much Love, daver Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/5/2012 11:23:00 AM I really like this piece Andrea,, haven't read a better one for a while, its music and writing entwined theme really appeals to me..) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/5/2012 10:33:00 AM very lovely and light hearted.. good luck if for a contest Andrea.. am trying to judge mine if I can stay logged in long enough.. maybe hitch a ride on this sweet unicorn ?? anythinbg would help..oh.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/5/2012 10:32:00 AM very lovely and light hearted.. good luck if for a contest Andrea.. am trying to judge mine if I can stay logged in long enough.. maybe hitch a ride on this sweet unicorn ?? anythinbg would help..oh.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/5/2012 10:21:00 AM love this sweet piece, andrea. many congrats on all your wins and the new baby too Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/5/2012 10:02:00 AM Very pleasant write Andrea.It refreshes the mind.Love the flow here. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/5/2012 9:38:00 AM So light-hearted and whimsical. Makes we want to dance. A lovely write, Andrea. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 4/5/2012 9:14:00 AM Just beautiful. You seem to write so smoothly and easily. I love to read your poems. Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 4/5/2012 7:50:00 AM NOW ANDREA! i think I've warned you before, BUT, just in case...here goes....""IT is perfectly normal to dance with unicorns....but never....I repeat NEVER ever ever ever....play leapfrog with a unicorn!" It ends up being a real pain in the ASS-pirin ....every dang gone dagum time!!!!! BTW ...I love the poem. Any poem that evokes memories, visuals, thoughts, or basically any good vibe...I DIGG! and I dig you as well. Sorry I don't read many blogs...I should, and I will try. Missed ya tho'! Login to Reply

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