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Dancing Sparks

the wood was too green
     above the flames the sparks danced
          the fire gave its warmth

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Linda Alice Fowler

July 1, 2025 at 6:58 AM

So nice to see you again Bill. Nice fire. :)

Bill Baker

July 2, 2025 at 6:11 PM

Thanks, Linda, a repost with a few changes. I deleted all my poems and started over. LOL So I'll edit some of the ones I really liked and repost them along with the new ones. I'm also going to post the 6 that were in the two Poetry Soup Anthologies my poems were in. I shouldn't have deleted those 6 for sure. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Paige Hind

June 22, 2025 at 5:30 PM

Very "fiery" image!

Bill Baker

June 27, 2025 at 5:04 PM

Thanks, Paige. Just get going again, deeper and more meaningful poetry is coming, my friend. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Kim Rodrigues

June 22, 2025 at 11:06 AM

Annteresting write!Love that first line!

Bill Baker

June 27, 2025 at 5:06 PM

If you want sparks, green is the name of the game when building a fire. Thanks for the visits, Kim. I'll start reading and commenting soon, my friend. Bill

Jay Narain

June 22, 2025 at 10:09 AM

Nice haiku.

Bill Baker

June 27, 2025 at 5:06 PM

Thanks, Jay. Nice to see you again. I'll be more active in a week or so. Have a great week! Bill

Sotto Poet

June 22, 2025 at 7:06 AM

Great Haiku, Tex, indeed green wood burns poorly, making ignition hard. Wood is moist, but life and motion persist. Fire feeds and comforts despite weak fuel and blazing rejection. This may reflect resilience, demonstrating the ability to retain warmth and a sense of connection despite difficulties.

Bill Baker

June 27, 2025 at 5:08 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Sotto. I'll get some deeper poems on here soon. I deleted all the old ones and I'm starting over. lol Tex isn't catching on, so it will be Bill from now on. Have a great day, my friend. Bill

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