Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Light Verse

Dancing Rainbow Shade

Dancing rainbow shade, up!
                      Up! Up in the air!

    Dutifully knight-like armors for me and my hair
           From sunny light's warmth and glare
          Enabling, granting me to run and play
            From even sweet to mournful skies
    With it... still, I can relax, enjoy a passing day

                  Wish I can move up! Up!
              Grasp! Gripping! Using it's hand!
              Naughty wind will blow us away!
              Magically, soaring like the sleigh!

               Hoping, no lightning shall struck,
                     It's spectrum of petals
                  Avoiding, any fatal dilemma
                  Yet, if heaven's light struck
                  I pray only a minor trauma
            Such a probable day with my umbrella

                                by
                            olive_eloi
                             1:31 am
                           03/24/2014

CONTEST: Poem with a theme of "Umbrella" Free Poetry 
SPONSOR: LEONORA GALINTA
4TH PLACE
                             
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James Fraser December 4, 2014 at 2:09 PM Oh to see you dancing in the rain holding an umbrella whilst a Rainbow follows you in the hoping you'll be in it's colours, James :) :)

Paul Callus April 7, 2014 at 3:38 PM Dear Olive_eloi, I have just noticed that in this contest you had another fine worthy placing. Congrats!! Your work is not going unnoticed. :) Immensly like this poem...such as "spectrum of petals" :) You do yourself proud. :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 7, 2014 at 4:05 PM thanks Paul.. i appreciate every comment you give.. :) to God be the greatest glory as always.. :) ++olive_eloi with a wave

Kim Merryman April 4, 2014 at 9:15 PM A sweet write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 7, 2014 at 3:59 PM Thank you so much Kim for dropping by.. :D! to God the greatest glory.. :)

Sara Kendrick April 4, 2014 at 3:55 PM Great imagination sparks this winning work..Congrats..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:45 AM Thanks much Sara..:) really appreciate your marks..:)

Skat A April 3, 2014 at 10:27 PM NICE POEM....SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:46 AM Thank you skat..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2014 at 5:02 AM My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:47 AM Thanks Dr. Ram really appreciate you dropping by..:)

Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2014 at 11:51 PM This is really good. ..pd Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:44 AM ThNks much Linda ..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 11:27 AM - Hey Olive - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 2, 2014 at 5:14 PM thanks Anne Lise.. :) to God is the greatest glory.. :)

Len Gasun April 2, 2014 at 10:53 AM My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend olive ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 2, 2014 at 5:14 PM thanks much Leonora.. I appreciate it.. :) God bless u a thousand times... hugs back.. :D

Darren Watson March 2, 2014 at 5:11 AM Another joyful read , I feel like Popeye discovering Olive for the first time . I'd best go have some spinach for breakfast , lol Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 2, 2014 at 5:27 PM spinach for a breakfast :D hahahah nice one.. thanks.. :)