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Dancing Rainbow Shade

Dancing rainbow shade, up! Up! Up in the air! Dutifully knight-like armors for me and my hair From sunny light's warmth and glare Enabling, granting me to run and play From even sweet to mournful skies With it... still, I can relax, enjoy a passing day Wish I can move up! Up! Grasp! Gripping! Using it's hand! Naughty wind will blow us away! Magically, soaring like the sleigh! Hoping, no lightning shall struck, It's spectrum of petals Avoiding, any fatal dilemma Yet, if heaven's light struck I pray only a minor trauma Such a probable day with my umbrella by olive_eloi 1:31 am 03/24/2014 CONTEST: Poem with a theme of "Umbrella" Free Poetry SPONSOR: LEONORA GALINTA 4TH PLACE ---------------------------------------------------------

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James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2014 2:09:00 PM

Oh to see you dancing in the rain holding an umbrella whilst a Rainbow follows you in the hoping you'll be in it's colours, James :) :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2014 3:38:00 PM

Dear Olive_eloi, I have just noticed that in this contest you had another fine worthy placing. Congrats!! Your work is not going unnoticed. :) Immensly like this poem...such as "spectrum of petals" :) You do yourself proud. :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 4:05:00 PM

thanks Paul.. i appreciate every comment you give.. :) to God be the greatest glory as always.. :) ++olive_eloi with a wave

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2014 9:15:00 PM

A sweet write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 3:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim for dropping by.. :D! to God the greatest glory.. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2014 3:55:00 PM

Great imagination sparks this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:45:00 AM

Thanks much Sara..:) really appreciate your marks..:)

Skat A

Date: 4/3/2014 10:27:00 PM

NICE POEM....SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:46:00 AM

Thank you skat..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2014 5:02:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram really appreciate you dropping by..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2014 11:51:00 PM

This is really good. ..pd

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:44:00 AM

ThNks much Linda ..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2014 11:27:00 AM

- Hey Olive - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/2/2014 5:14:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise.. :) to God is the greatest glory.. :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/2/2014 10:53:00 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend olive ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/2/2014 5:14:00 PM

thanks much Leonora.. I appreciate it.. :) God bless u a thousand times... hugs back.. :D

Darren Watson

Date: 3/2/2014 5:11:00 AM

Another joyful read , I feel like Popeye discovering Olive for the first time . I'd best go have some spinach for breakfast , lol

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/2/2014 5:27:00 PM

spinach for a breakfast :D hahahah nice one.. thanks.. :)