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Dancing Prancing Cry Cry Cry

Dancing prancing cry cry cry Whirling twirling die die die Up on the roof top Laughing with maniacal glee Saddest moment ever Keeping this to myself, as you can see Shopping, buying everything in sight Wishing someone would unplug me Or turn out the light Life of the party, collecting strangers all around Falling fast, and hard, maybe to never again Fully be found. Dancing prancing Cry cry cry Bi-polar fun. Why? Why? Why?

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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 4/6/2019 5:15:00 PM
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This is so evocative... masterfully penned, my friend! You perfectly capture the impossible whirling speed of manic life!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 12:20:00 AM
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Thank you so much, my Soul Sister!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/6/2019 2:40:00 PM
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love the edgy feel of your poem which highlights a medley of emotions, caren...huggs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 12:21:00 AM
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I like providing a bit of fun, and truth, in the form of a poem that has a tiny zing.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/6/2019 2:21:00 PM
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A hard hitting honest poem. 'Laughing with maniacal glee' cool
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 12:21:00 AM
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I know; that too is my favorite part, at this second.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/6/2019 1:27:00 PM
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I am dizzy...dizzy...dizzy...but, I think I can see to come full-circle anyway.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 12:22:00 AM
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I appreciate your stop-by, and comment, my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/6/2019 12:37:00 PM
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Hi Caren Yes, this sounds like you. Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 12:23:00 AM
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It is SO me, Patti. So very me at this second, on this day, for a tiny sliver of a moment.
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/6/2019 12:28:00 PM
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As they say, Stop the world, I want to get off.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 12:24:00 AM
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Aha, David, but the crux is I can jump whenever I want.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 4/6/2019 7:28:00 AM
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Oh wow... This is so deep... I just loved it .. "Bipolar fun" ... Wow.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/6/2019 8:29:00 AM
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It is one thing I know about for sure, and to tell you the truth, I do not take any meds unless I go all depressive for the MANIC phase is my norm.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/6/2019 4:40:00 AM
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Its all sounds like a roller coaster ride, Well written and self explanatory. Hope all is well, have a wonderful day dear friend xo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/6/2019 8:29:00 AM
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It is, and it always will be for I know what to do and when to do it, Pixie Dust.

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