Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Dancing Prancing Cry Cry Cry

Dancing prancing
cry cry cry
Whirling twirling
die die die

Up on the roof top
Laughing with maniacal glee
Saddest moment ever
Keeping this to myself, as you can see

Shopping, buying everything in sight
Wishing someone would unplug me
Or turn out the light

Life of the party, collecting strangers all around
Falling fast, and hard, maybe to never again
Fully be found.

Dancing prancing
Cry cry cry
Bi-polar fun.
Why? Why? Why?

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Rhona Mcferran April 6, 2019 at 5:15 PM This is so evocative... masterfully penned, my friend! You perfectly capture the impossible whirling speed of manic life! Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 12:20 AM Thank you so much, my Soul Sister!

Nette Onclaud April 6, 2019 at 2:40 PM love the edgy feel of your poem which highlights a medley of emotions, caren...huggs Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 12:21 AM I like providing a bit of fun, and truth, in the form of a poem that has a tiny zing.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 6, 2019 at 2:21 PM A hard hitting honest poem. 'Laughing with maniacal glee' cool Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 12:21 AM I know; that too is my favorite part, at this second.

M. L. Kiser April 6, 2019 at 1:27 PM I am dizzy...dizzy...dizzy...but, I think I can see to come full-circle anyway. Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 12:22 AM I appreciate your stop-by, and comment, my friend.

Panagiota Romios April 6, 2019 at 12:37 PM Hi Caren Yes, this sounds like you. Panagiota Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 12:23 AM It is SO me, Patti. So very me at this second, on this day, for a tiny sliver of a moment.

David Mchattie April 6, 2019 at 12:28 PM As they say, Stop the world, I want to get off. Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 12:24 AM Aha, David, but the crux is I can jump whenever I want.

Swetha Vangaveti April 6, 2019 at 7:28 AM Oh wow... This is so deep... I just loved it .. "Bipolar fun" ... Wow. Caren Krutsinger April 6, 2019 at 8:29 AM It is one thing I know about for sure, and to tell you the truth, I do not take any meds unless I go all depressive for the MANIC phase is my norm.

Mystic Rose Rose April 6, 2019 at 4:40 AM Its all sounds like a roller coaster ride, Well written and self explanatory. Hope all is well, have a wonderful day dear friend xo Caren Krutsinger April 6, 2019 at 8:29 AM It is, and it always will be for I know what to do and when to do it, Pixie Dust.