Dancing On Air

A Tiny Dancer flits Upon a stage Buzzing…pirouettes Among flowers; The dance of Bumble Bees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Das Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 3:14 AM
Lovely write. Beautifully crafted . 7
Kiser Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thank you.
Kiser Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Thank you so much, Nandita.
Meade Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:12 PM
It's been a while since I danced with a bumble bee . . . not as agile as I once was . . . a bow to your performance. 7
Kiser Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Thanks David; I've danced with a few of them myself.
Hopper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 2:43 PM
So light. Short and sweet. Lovely!
Kiser Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Anna; you're very kind.
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