- Dancing Notes For Love -

Kissing deep beats fluttering dancing on a breathless whisper 
A snowdrop falls on the lips melt slowly kiss you beautiful 
The whisper of your voice, the warmth of your kiss and touch 
If love is to be true not even a kiss can tear us apart 

Warmly held under the moon smiling beams brightly shining 
Love is not a game of the heart where the truth is preserved 
Loving an angel flying grace inside lit up one of a thousand stars 
In silence stars twinkle but in the distance we overhear the ocean plays its song 

Magical sprinkling all stardust trails confetti sparkles flashing 
I look into your eyes your heart and your soul like a ray of sunlight 
Silver reflections casting shadows out enchants winks spotlights a dream 
The stars would shower me with stardust of your smile 

Written by Liam Mc Daid & A-L Andresen 30.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 26, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Liam, thank you for the nice reply.. LINDA
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April 13, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Another great collaborative work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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April 18, 2015 at 3:49 PM
thank you ever so kindly sara for the beautiful comment wishing you a great weekend
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 11:45 PM
a lovely write the two of you wrote, such a pleasure to have read, -love,p.d.
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April 18, 2015 at 3:40 PM
thank you linda for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated wishing you a lovely weekend
Onclaud Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 1:22 PM
like i told anne, this is exhillirating.. more power to the both of you, liam..huggs
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April 18, 2015 at 2:48 PM
ah thank you nette for the beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend
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April 11, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Another very beautiful masterpiece from both of you my dear friend Liam and Anne Lise! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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April 12, 2015 at 9:41 AM
leonora thank you dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a blessed day
Nunez Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Lovely..such a romantic collab. Congratulations, for you two, Liam and Anne.
Mcdaid Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:56 PM
kim thank you kindly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 8:10 AM
A beautiful collaboration.
Mcdaid Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:42 PM
thank you kindly richard for the wonderful comment wishing you a blessed weekend
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April 6, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Hello Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just awesome!A 7+++ to each!A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart.smiling.I enjoyed it!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^"
Mcdaid Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:41 PM
thank you ever so kindly dorian for the very beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed weekend
Neels Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Beautiful collab Liam ;) you and Anne Lise do this brilliantly ;) enjoyed this tonight
Mcdaid Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:36 PM
thank you ever so kindly wilma for the very beautiful comment wishing you a beautiful weekend
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April 6, 2015 at 5:20 AM
- Thanks Liam, keep sending me beautiful lines :) - Easter almost over and dailylife restarts, I wish you a great week :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:27 PM
always a pleasure writing with you anne lise wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend pal
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 4:44 AM
I'm starrry eyed reading this Anne lise and Liam you collaborate so brilliantly together - when the magic is right between two writers is obvious for all to see! Hugs jan xx
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April 10, 2015 at 5:50 PM
ahh your so sweet jan thank you dear pal for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a lovely weekend
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April 6, 2015 at 4:05 AM
OH...Stars stars stars....I love the stars...I love the ocean...I love nature and you bring it in a heady mix with love so beautifully. Wow, you two! :) Sunshine and you write well together, Liam. Hugs
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April 10, 2015 at 5:39 PM
the stars always in the darkness shines faraway dreams thank you for the beautiful comment eileen anne lise shone the light with her pen in this piece wishing you a beautiful weekend dear pal
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