Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Dancing Moonbeams

The suns rays fade softly as 
daylight melts into night
and mysterious moonbeams 
glow even bigger 
as the moonlight stretching across
the waters mirrored surface

enchanting ambient beams 
dance upon the dark gray
water of the lake floating on 
the night's whispering breeze 
Touching on the waters 
edge kissing the beach 
silver beams caress the 
warm sand not wishing to 
disturb any hidden lovers 
left in its darkness

When its time to float back on 
the night's soft breeze to 
continuing its dance with the 
water as it begins to transform
back into the suns rays 
warming the chilled water 
dawn slowly steals back its turn
To become daylight again 
nudging the shrinking moon
back to be lost in the light skies

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Smita Kulkarni November 15, 2019 at 3:13 PM Those beautiful dancing moonbeams! I love them, especially when they light up lake waters! Nicely penned Brenda! Brenda Chiri November 16, 2019 at 9:35 PM Thank you so much! Your visit is very appreciated!;)

John Hamilton November 14, 2019 at 9:56 AM This is a captivating write Brenda, pure classic lines this has, product of a keen mind! Brenda Chiri November 15, 2019 at 7:29 AM John thank you I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu November 11, 2019 at 6:11 PM Hello Brenda Chirl, a beautiful poem of the sunset over the water, a beautiful scene painted with your words. have a nice evening my friend. Brenda Chiri November 12, 2019 at 7:17 PM Thank you Darlene that's so nice of you!

Nick Trim November 11, 2019 at 5:11 PM Is it always plural or can a beam be seen after it's been beams as just a beam? fantastic write btw, just thought i'd fly the words out rt Brenda Chiri November 12, 2019 at 7:16 PM Lol thank you muppet!;)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian November 8, 2019 at 9:51 PM you painted a beautiful verbal masterpiece. SO enjoyed. Brenda Chiri November 9, 2019 at 12:45 AM Thank you so much Barbara! I appreciate your stopping by and wonderful comment!;)

John Fleming October 29, 2019 at 10:23 AM Wow!! I recall that when last speaking to you I did say that you have been writing some fantastic poetry of late. This is a perfect example. great writing, Brenda. Love every word! Lots of affection as always. :) john Brenda Chiri October 29, 2019 at 10:43 AM I'm so glad I could wow you John! Lol thank you for that wow! Never thought someone as good as you could be wowed by my simple words! Lol thank you so very much John! Kisses!;)

Jan Allison October 28, 2019 at 3:22 AM I'm lost for words Brenda - superb poetry the imagery is breath taking, into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Brenda Chiri October 28, 2019 at 4:08 AM Jan thank you so very much! Wow I really appreciate your warm comment! You have definitely made my day thank you once again!;)

Quoth Theraven October 27, 2019 at 7:42 PM Brenda, Always enjoy the soft whispered breeze and the counting of days like grains of sand. Very nice evening in poetic dance. -Richard Brenda Chiri October 27, 2019 at 7:50 PM Richard thank you so very much! As always your read is very important to me and very much appreciated!;)

Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2019 at 5:56 PM You are gifted. Fantastic poetry! Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri October 27, 2019 at 7:49 PM Ahhh Rick thank you so much! Though I think you are far too kind! I do appreciate your warm comment it did make me smile!;)

Ann Foster October 27, 2019 at 3:41 PM A lovely adventure, a dream... imagery... excellent... Ann Brenda Chiri October 27, 2019 at 7:48 PM Ann thank you so much! I do appreciate your read and lovely comment!;)

Beautiful Scars October 27, 2019 at 2:33 PM amazing as always sweet lady, that pen you pick up never ceases to amaze me. You are one of the best in my eyes. :) -luloo Brenda Chiri October 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM I am so glad you enjoyed this one too Laura! Now it brings me much joy when I see you have commented! As always this day has turned out to be a very good day for me! Thank you so much laura!;)

Sandra Adams October 27, 2019 at 7:23 AM nice penning, very vivid and soft imagery... this one just flows tenderly down the page...like the lake tracing its edges...i like how you brought it full circle again! lovely poem Brenda :) Brenda Chiri October 27, 2019 at 9:41 AM Thank you sandy I do appreciate your stopping by always a pleasure to read your comments!;)