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Dancing Moonbeams

The suns rays fade softly as daylight melts into night and mysterious moonbeams glow even bigger as the moonlight stretching across the waters mirrored surface enchanting ambient beams dance upon the dark gray water of the lake floating on the night's whispering breeze Touching on the waters edge kissing the beach silver beams caress the warm sand not wishing to disturb any hidden lovers left in its darkness When its time to float back on the night's soft breeze to continuing its dance with the water as it begins to transform back into the suns rays warming the chilled water dawn slowly steals back its turn To become daylight again nudging the shrinking moon back to be lost in the light skies

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 11/15/2019 3:13:00 PM

Those beautiful dancing moonbeams! I love them, especially when they light up lake waters! Nicely penned Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/16/2019 9:35:00 PM

Thank you so much! Your visit is very appreciated!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 11/14/2019 9:56:00 AM

This is a captivating write Brenda, pure classic lines this has, product of a keen mind!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/15/2019 7:29:00 AM

John thank you I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/11/2019 6:11:00 PM

Hello Brenda Chirl, a beautiful poem of the sunset over the water, a beautiful scene painted with your words. have a nice evening my friend.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/12/2019 7:17:00 PM

Thank you Darlene that's so nice of you!

Nick Trim

Date: 11/11/2019 5:11:00 PM

Is it always plural or can a beam be seen after it's been beams as just a beam? fantastic write btw, just thought i'd fly the words out rt

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/12/2019 7:16:00 PM

Lol thank you muppet!;)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 11/8/2019 9:51:00 PM

you painted a beautiful verbal masterpiece. SO enjoyed.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/9/2019 12:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Barbara! I appreciate your stopping by and wonderful comment!;)

John Fleming

Date: 10/29/2019 10:23:00 AM

Wow!! I recall that when last speaking to you I did say that you have been writing some fantastic poetry of late. This is a perfect example. great writing, Brenda. Love every word! Lots of affection as always. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/29/2019 10:43:00 AM

I'm so glad I could wow you John! Lol thank you for that wow! Never thought someone as good as you could be wowed by my simple words! Lol thank you so very much John! Kisses!;)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2019 3:22:00 AM

I'm lost for words Brenda - superb poetry the imagery is breath taking, into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/28/2019 4:08:00 AM

Jan thank you so very much! Wow I really appreciate your warm comment! You have definitely made my day thank you once again!;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/27/2019 7:42:00 PM

Brenda, Always enjoy the soft whispered breeze and the counting of days like grains of sand. Very nice evening in poetic dance. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2019 7:50:00 PM

Richard thank you so very much! As always your read is very important to me and very much appreciated!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2019 5:56:00 PM

You are gifted. Fantastic poetry! Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2019 7:49:00 PM

Ahhh Rick thank you so much! Though I think you are far too kind! I do appreciate your warm comment it did make me smile!;)

Ann Foster

Date: 10/27/2019 3:41:00 PM

A lovely adventure, a dream... imagery... excellent... Ann

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2019 7:48:00 PM

Ann thank you so much! I do appreciate your read and lovely comment!;)

Lu Loo

Date: 10/27/2019 2:33:00 PM

amazing as always sweet lady, that pen you pick up never ceases to amaze me. You are one of the best in my eyes. :) -luloo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2019 3:19:00 PM

I am so glad you enjoyed this one too Laura! Now it brings me much joy when I see you have commented! As always this day has turned out to be a very good day for me! Thank you so much laura!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/27/2019 7:23:00 AM

nice penning, very vivid and soft imagery... this one just flows tenderly down the page...like the lake tracing its edges...i like how you brought it full circle again! lovely poem Brenda :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thank you sandy I do appreciate your stopping by always a pleasure to read your comments!;)