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Dancing in the Rain

I close my eye's and imagine you. My mind is set free and my heart races. Your eye's sparkle in the moon light, deep and full of life. Your stong arms embracing our bodies together, forcing the heat of our passion through wet clothes. BREATHLESS, as your sweet smokey kisses take me away. We sway along through the rain drops, gliding across the mirror of stars glittering above. Dancing to the beat of our Heart, and the chiming of the rain falling like a curtain around us. LOOKING into your eye's I can see my life. FEELING you against me, I am at peace. TOGETHER at last, I am Free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/1/2010 1:52:00 PM
Breath taking poem. I enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 12/3/2009 3:05:00 PM
YOUR WORDS HAVE REACHED MY INNER SELF. I AWAIT YOUR NEXT. DONALD RODDY
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Date: 11/4/2009 10:09:00 AM
perfect wrte and such a beautiful emotional one indeed this is the best poem ive readin awhile really you have set the bar high. great job
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Date: 10/28/2009 9:55:00 AM
It is a brighter day for me today after reading your wonderful poetry. I wish you a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration Ashley. Love, Carol
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