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What the World Loves poetry contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 06/27/25...(instructions: write a 5 line poem using only 25 syllables about one of 4 theme/ titles, form: Other)

Dancing in the Rain

"Dancing in the rain is how we turn heartache into art."- unknown

whine, buzz, warped air
wet blanket heat
rumbling, skies tear
thundering, clouds meet
Dance in the rain without'a care

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Karen Jones June 29, 2025 at 1:45 PM Love that quote and the poem follows the theory! Congratulations! Crystol Woods June 29, 2025 at 9:25 PM I thought so too! Thanks so much! Xo

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2025 at 12:25 PM So glad this one made the list because it is well-deserving of it. Congrats Crystol Woods June 29, 2025 at 9:24 PM Well thank you for your vote! I'm honored you think so highly of it! Xo

Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2025 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write and quote. Oh yes, let's "Dance in the rain without'a care." Have a blessed day with your win........... Crystol Woods June 29, 2025 at 9:23 PM Ok let's go! I'll splash you with puddles and you can blast me with dish soap! :) something my cousins used to do... so difficult to get that rinsed off! Lol! Xo

Howard Kerr June 29, 2025 at 9:55 AM Cristol, Thank you again for your kind words on my entry. This atmospheric work has potent imagery and an intriguing plot rounded off with a teasing finale Amazing Congratulations Howard Crystol Woods June 29, 2025 at 9:20 PM You're very welcome! Ty for returning the favor and visiting me! Xo

Len Gasun June 28, 2025 at 6:44 PM Gorgeous and so uplifting! I love this and enjoyed immensely. Thanks a lot for sharing. So honored to share the podium with you! Big Congrats on your win dear poet friend! Hugs and cheers! God bless you always with your poetry! Crystol Woods June 29, 2025 at 7:00 AM You're too kind, thank you! I enjoyed yours as well! Xo

Jeanette Swan June 28, 2025 at 3:22 AM That's a summertime dance! The world gets bigger in your poem when the warped air under the wet blanket heat can tear and clouds get dancing feet. J :) Crystol Woods June 29, 2025 at 6:59 AM Tysm for stopping by! Xo

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2025 at 4:57 PM Love this, Crystol . A very original take on the theme Crystol Woods June 28, 2025 at 1:45 AM Tysm Andrea! I thought it was not original enough but I'm glad you think it is... you are a better judge than I! Xo