Deb Wilson Poet Free verse

Dancing In the Pines

Dancing in the pines
Feel warm dirt
Under my feet
Twirling
Getting dizzy with
Exhilaration
Heed this call now
Mother Earth
Let me celebrate you as
I spin around


29 words...
dancing..in..the..pines..feel..warm..dirt..under..my..feet..twirling..getting
dizzy..with..exhilaration..heed..this..call..now..Mother..Earth..let..me..
celebrate..you..as..I..spin..around


**for nikko palmario's contest..29 Words

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Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2010 at 8:37 PM LOVE IT, DEB, congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts September 25, 2010 at 11:48 AM lovely , congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2010 at 11:23 AM Congratulations on your win Deb in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall September 24, 2010 at 5:09 AM Ah a perfect summer moment, a pleasure to read. Congrats on your placement

Robert A. Dufresne September 23, 2010 at 5:05 PM beautiful Deb! congratulations to you!

Sharon Tideswell September 23, 2010 at 2:02 PM Congratulations on your 2nd place win. A lovely read ~ Sharon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 23, 2010 at 12:40 PM Congratulations on your second place win, Deb

Wilma Neels September 23, 2010 at 12:20 PM Deb, congratulations on your awesome win in Nikko's contest, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 23, 2010 at 11:12 AM Congrats Deb on your big win in Nikko's contest.. a super poem.. enjoy your amazing victory and success with luv my friend...

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 23, 2010 at 10:17 AM HI Deb and super congrats for your 2nd place win in my contest ^_^ I just loved how this celebrates nature and how it inspires-- I could almost breathe in those pines and feel that warm dirt digging through my toes!! Wonderful wonderful write!-- nikko :)

Constance La France September 15, 2010 at 7:00 AM Thanks for commenting on my poetry, Deb. I think this poem is so uplifting, I am a dancer so I often just want to spin, especially when I am in nature, best of luck in the contest~~

Doris Culverhouse September 15, 2010 at 4:00 AM enjoyed the dancing dizzy's--reminder of youth and twirling till I fell down was such fun! I watch my son do it now.