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Dancing In the Pines

Dancing in the pines Feel warm dirt Under my feet Twirling Getting dizzy with Exhilaration Heed this call now Mother Earth Let me celebrate you as I spin around 29 words... dancing..in..the..pines..feel..warm..dirt..under..my..feet..twirling..getting dizzy..with..exhilaration..heed..this..call..now..Mother..Earth..let..me.. celebrate..you..as..I..spin..around **for nikko palmario's contest..29 Words

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2010 8:37:00 PM

LOVE IT, DEB, congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/25/2010 11:48:00 AM

lovely , congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2010 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Deb in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/24/2010 5:09:00 AM

Ah a perfect summer moment, a pleasure to read. Congrats on your placement

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/23/2010 5:05:00 PM

beautiful Deb! congratulations to you!

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 9/23/2010 2:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win. A lovely read ~ Sharon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2010 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your second place win, Deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/23/2010 12:20:00 PM

Deb, congratulations on your awesome win in Nikko's contest, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2010 11:12:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your big win in Nikko's contest.. a super poem.. enjoy your amazing victory and success with luv my friend...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/23/2010 10:17:00 AM

HI Deb and super congrats for your 2nd place win in my contest ^_^ I just loved how this celebrates nature and how it inspires-- I could almost breathe in those pines and feel that warm dirt digging through my toes!! Wonderful wonderful write!-- nikko :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2010 7:00:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry, Deb. I think this poem is so uplifting, I am a dancer so I often just want to spin, especially when I am in nature, best of luck in the contest~~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2010 4:00:00 AM

enjoyed the dancing dizzy's--reminder of youth and twirling till I fell down was such fun! I watch my son do it now.