Dancing In Stillness

A window’s reflection of night
Traps silence in the light of its stare
Eyes ingrained in solitude’s trust

A pane of forgotten fare
As morning light trades memories with yesterday
Constantly shifting it, with the colours of time

Images colliding like voices in the mist
Anonymous objects silent in their pursuit
Of a sun’s sweep, brushes hasty at their palette

Painting chaotic kaleidoscopes at its zenith
To peeling oiled layers at dusk, now
A silhouette of moon beams
Dancing in stillness

Upon its inflected soul




19 July 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/24/2015 11:59:00 PM
Hey thnx Robert, your comments are inspiring to me and sincerely appreciated. Not getting around to much time on PS these days, must FIND the time!
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:45:00 PM
This poems strikes me deeply. I see in it deep understanding, brilliant craftsmanship and poetic talent given for the world to enjoy. Even more than that--inspiration! Adding this gem to my fav poem list. Thanks much..
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Date: 7/19/2015 3:09:00 AM
Mark..I like the way your pen has captured a moment that was special to you...keep writing...Peter.
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Date: 7/20/2015 3:05:00 AM
Thanks Peter, Im glad you stopped by. It was more a "metaphorical" moment I captured day dreaming!!
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