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Dancing In His Underwear

I shuddered at a voice so pure it moved my eyes to tears, the music grew to fill my chest, and satiate my ears and then I shook, a man possessed, cavortin' 'cross the floor, collapsing in a sweaty heap, for I could bear no more! Like an ol' time tent revival, I lost sense of who and where, or what this poor ol' boy was doin' dancin' in his underwear! For I was all but nekkid, what a sight for all to see, embarrassed, I just paid the fine and turned around to flee!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/18/2016 6:07:00 PM
Ha Ha, nice job Keith. Great poem. Regards, Craig
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/20/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thanks much Craig! Keith
Date: 6/10/2016 9:45:00 PM
Oh the vision! Can't stop laughing! Such a fun read!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/20/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks so much Trudy! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 6/9/2016 12:50:00 PM
haha!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/20/2016 1:48:00 PM
He he!!! Keith

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