Alexis Y. Poet Limerick

Dancing In Gertrude

There was a young lass from Gertrude 
    Who just loved to dance in the nude
           But she had two left feet
          She could not hold a beat
       To top it all off she was rude



  




* Gertrude is a ghost town in West Virginia 

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4-10-18

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Freddie Robinson Jr. April 16, 2018 at 6:00 PM This was such a nice teasing limerick, Alexis. You're really good at this poem form! Love and smiles always. Freddie Robinson Jr. April 16, 2018 at 6:04 PM Btw ... Great title! Anyone who can use the word Gertrude in a poem gets the tip of my cap black top mad props. You be the coolest cat w/the best pen chops. Love and joy always.

Eve Roper April 14, 2018 at 10:59 AM Back with congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry April 14, 2018 at 9:41 AM Congratulations on your win with this humorous well-written limerick!

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2018 at 5:09 PM I remember this adorable one. Congrats, Alexis.

Connie Marcum Wong April 13, 2018 at 4:00 PM Congratulations Alexis. Someone probably said something unkind about her body. Lol A good one! : )

Carrie Richards April 13, 2018 at 3:30 PM Well done, Alexis !!! It's not nice to be rude LOL !!

Paul Callus April 13, 2018 at 3:15 PM Back with congratulations, Alexis! Truly deserved. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire April 13, 2018 at 2:50 PM Knew this was a winner, Alexis. Congratulations!

Charlie Smith April 13, 2018 at 12:15 PM A bit "crude" but funny, congratulations Alexis, well done...

Robert L. Hinshaw April 13, 2018 at 11:48 AM I love great lims and this is a great one - congrats on your well-deserved win! Thx for your kind comment re my win - Bob

Janice Canerdy April 13, 2018 at 8:25 AM Wow! Naked, clumsy AND rude! Congrats, Alexis! Janice

Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 8:21 AM Congrats!

Line Gauthier April 13, 2018 at 5:01 AM A ghost town no less! Adorable little limerick, congrats on your fine win, Alexis.

Winged Warrior April 13, 2018 at 4:36 AM A chuckle from a ghost town...we gotta get that lady a dance instructor lol...well done Alexis...^WW^

Jan Allison April 13, 2018 at 3:12 AM Many congrats Alexis, i'm delighted to see you on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry April 12, 2018 at 8:25 PM Lol! Good one!

Paul Callus April 12, 2018 at 5:47 PM A truly funny one, Alexis. I would excuse her for not being good at dancing, but being rude puts me off her! ~ Regards // paul

Robertina B. April 12, 2018 at 10:51 AM So awesome Alexis!!! I enjoyed it.. Brava!!!

Holly Bohto April 12, 2018 at 10:50 AM You go girl. I used writing my own style of poetry for healing, now I've moved on to other types of style. Miss you girl. Alexis Y. April 12, 2018 at 11:23 AM Hi Holly , Thank you so much. I have to visit your page to get reacquainted with your style. I've missed you too. Are you back? :-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2018 at 7:04 PM Great job with this challenge, Alexis. I quite liked this.

Eve Roper April 11, 2018 at 6:51 PM excellent, Alexis, hehehehe... watch your "nude".. just teasing.:) . luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Maria Williams April 11, 2018 at 5:45 PM Oh quite a sight for sore eyes this Gertrude, this is such a fun limerick Alexis, should do very well in the contest, good luck....Maria xx

Carolyn Devonshire April 11, 2018 at 5:17 PM Well, this is one dance recital I don't want to see. With my luck, Gertrude would turn into a rude, lewd, nude DUDE. Enjoyed the humor, Alexis! Best wishes in the contest.

Charles Messina April 11, 2018 at 12:10 PM Cute limerick Alexis, reminds me of a time I streaked through a wedding..lol Nice to meet you...Charlie Alexis Y. April 11, 2018 at 12:13 PM Hi Charles, Thank you very much. It's nice to meet you too:-) Alexis

Muhammad Imtiaz April 11, 2018 at 11:31 AM Great dance Alexis

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